One Piece: King in the clouds

Before the Straw Hats ever set sail, there were the early years of pirates. Atlas is an escaped experiment, hell-bent on revenge, willing to align himself with a crew that will become one of the most infamous in history before vanishing from it entirely. Will he manage to carve out a name of his own, or will he be forgotten just as thoroughly as Xebec himself by the time Luffy sets sail? His mission of revenge may lead him further than he ever imagined. To escape the bloodshed, one must look to the clouds. Hey there, I won't lie this whole fanfic is something that will be updated whenever I get inspiration for it. I like to create these stories and work off the world building inside the established lore/canon to explore what could be possible if someone was willing to push the norms of their uses. some of that will mean I will step into pseudo fanon but only in so much as I am using the tech and other power systems that exist in the one piece world in ways the op never intended or showed it being possible to use, so have no way to confirm whether they would consider it canon or not. I will leave that up to you guys. will have slight alternate universe in it, in that Linlin in this world is instead looking for the perfect person to have her kids with. do with that as you will but yeah she will be the main love interest too. going to try a more slow approach but let me know what you think. Other than that, I would love any constructive criticism as I would really like to improve my work.