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Chapter 1 Prologue "F u, F me, F everyone" begin
There a youth that was in his college dorm on the phone talk with someone
On the other side of the phone, the person was screaming"You are unless son, Ivan"
"I knew that mom" wanting to end the conversation as fast as possible so he didn't need to hear the yelling of his mother
"Me and your dad had decided that, we will disown you, Ivan if you can't get a single decent job after college, Bye"
"De"
Then call end
"Why MOTHER do you have to say that"
"I know I am not supposed to cry as I am a normal guy and not some with some weird-ass feisty but hearing mother wanting to cry for some reason."
Sudden a suicide though about in his mind
"I can just kill myself, what is that stopping me down from doing it?"
"No, I can't just kill myself as there is so much more to live for, I haven't even lived for 30 years old"
he wants to experience more in his life.
"I should go to the park for a walk to stop myself from feeling sad."
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"O I feel much more better after a few walks."
"What should do to be more productive?"
As he walking the park he suddenly saw the girl that sent a cold sweat to his spine, like he eats breakfast but then discovering it had spoiled."
"OoOoh NoOoOo!, WHAT FVCK is she doing here."
As he recognize who the girl Immediate knowing who she is.
Author: who is she?
A) the mom
B)no one care just run
C)his sister?
D)he going to meet her anyway
"I should run the right way before she discovers me here."
The girl slowly comes to Ivan.
"Hey, your Ivan right? from SanitFort high school too.
"..."
Please just go away, I was having a nice day but why does she show up here? Just need to walk away like I don't hear her. I knew it dick move but I can't just talk with her or it makes thing more awkward
"..."
"..."
Why isn't she talking, you known what I better just walk away since she not ask me anything besides are you Ivan and if I Ignore it counts as no right?
A crowd gather
"...."
why the F are they gathering here, they usually Ignore homeless people or call the cop for removing them so why have are they caring about her. I better end this quick or she cries and then they would be those so call hero that shows up out of nowhere when the heroine is facing abuse and hero show up and I bet something are dream about and all them can just get truck-kan and come to fantasy world, this real life and not some manga or anime so the chance of hero show up is zero but then they social media, where these people can trash talk me like they no tomorrow, I saw someone that review a novel he donest like and die for looking at screen for 24 hour. I don't care if someone die for trash talk about me but I didn't like people talk between my back for something I didn't do.
I just someone someone that happen to be near her when she crying. I have say something become scum come.
"What did you said" I ask again
trying to pretend I didn't hear her before to make her talk now so she won't go back to crying and I have to take the blame for being a dick.
"You Ivan right ? sobbing*"
I hate myself for get into this situation.
"Yeah I am Ivan from Sanitfort high school."
Now I answer your question please let me go.
"From class 911?"
"Yeah I am from that class."
Fuck before I thought she only know high school where I am from but now I am fucked for real, as I recognize from the same high school but I didn't think that she from the same class.
"What weirdord"
Someone from the crowd said
the school famous for rising the state most stupid people but the class is what makes the school famous is it place for student that fail middle school to retry and that why someone call me weriod and it also where most psychopath is there instead of prison to be brainwas- I mean re-educate to train them in think that if someone say something bad about the government they need to kill them and it especially effective in environment where the kids are stupid and have bad thoughts about the government.
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Flash back
When I first come i saw a kid that was being drag from his feet, blood cover his i entire face. I didn't know why I didn't move but I known on that day I was scared as hell because I try cover my own eye.
"Let go, students."
"Teaches, what was that?"
Wonder why isn't she scared and why is this happening
"Oo they just clean the trash."
"But there is Per"
She look at me dissatisfied and respond before I can Finish
"Do you want to be trash too?"
"No, Madam
I answering her as quickly as possible to avoid known I will having the same fate as the bloody kid if I question her.
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Back to present
Maybe she isn't a crazy psychopath
"Do you known me?"
"Yeah I am Freyia, we were classmate before"
"Well how your day, today?"
She continue to crying
"My boyfriend break up with me."
I very want to say "very nice" but there people looking at me.
"He must be one heck of stupid guy for dumping such a beauty like yourself."
"You want to go on walk?"
"O..Ok"
We went on walk and talk about many topic. I start to like her even more after time went on even thought at the start I felt that she was annoying and as time went on i end on become in love with her and at Valentine's Day I confess to her that I love her and she accept me.
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Chapter 1 end
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