So here's my plan if you guys don't mind I'll be rewriting this but only upload delete the current ones once the new version is done. I'll be honest I feel like I could've executed things far better than I did, I feel like I should've gone more in depth in the various kills. I feel like I could've developed a bit more of a backstory and more of a motivation to kill than he has. I feel as if he should've went after each one of his victims loved ones after seeing how each one acted after thinking they successfully killed the main character. I feel like I rushed certain aspects far too much like killing off all the teens far too quickly. But I want your guy's opinion before I rewrite it because I can see why others would say it doesn't need one. Also itd be after I finish writing a whole lot of chapters for Gravity Falls The Lord Of Darkness because I've seen a review and some comments about people being afraid I'm going to drop it since it's my third rewrite. And honestly the main reason why I wanted to rewrite it because I rushed certain things far too much and I felt like I could do so much better. Anyways I got some more writing to get done before I sleep, go to the store, and work. But yeah I'll seeya all later let me know your thoughts down below please because I know so many of you don't comment. I'll be trying to increase my upload rate to how it was eventually so until then bare with me.
