I re-edited the first few chaps, changing it entirely but she still died the same way. I realized that my former friend who edited those chapters didn't write it well. It felt very odd. Sometimes I tend to edit with friends but I've stopped because I realized our writing styles don't match. I'm also not friends with them anymore due to some fued. They edited the first three chaps and I'm writing the rest This was an old dropped story that I picked up.
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"I'm disappointed in you, Melina. Becoming a dog for the rich?" A young woman sneered, her tone dripping with disdain as she galred at Melina. At the moment it was only her and that woman in the empty restaurant the staff busily working in the kitchen.
Melina didn't flinch. She bit into her sandwich leisurely, chewing slowly. "Money solves all problems," she replied flatly, crumbs brushing against her lips.
