Hello, everyone. I hope you have been liking the story so far. Unfortunately, precisely for that reason, I find it necessary to rewrite it.
As you may have noticed, all the characters had different layers to themselves, with each one having depth to explore, realistic, and representative of struggles that are not far removed from reality.
Alex, well, he has his mysteries to be discovered, and he is not a simple playboy who only knows to flirt and have fun. His family has each member presented as individuals with their own desires, and steps they take to make them become reality. His friends, of the same age, have their own matters. Like Lance who, after flying free all his life, has to come back on Earth now and take some necessary responsibilities. Tyler who is steady, but had his story, and his struggle with his love he is unable to express for some reasons. And even Ron who you may have noticed some things about.
But Sharon, who should have been the second most important character, seems to be having her personality buried into dullness. She should have been bright, only slightly dimmer than Alex himself.
At first, I considered having her as a mercenary who took to evolving in the dark world because of the difficulties of growing up poor and troubled, another mystery that I have started to foreshadow. But I crossed that idea because I needed something brighter. Moreover, I did not want a cold female character with her emotions hidden deep again, like Estrella in "Humans' Limits". And I already had returned soldiers in "Love from the ashes". However, I have found that the character has devolved into what I have wanted to avoid despite planning for it, making me more and more reluctant to continue like that. Until I had an inspiration, and a true thread to follow for a rewrite that will promise more excitement, more passion, and more life, in a realistic setting.
Just a new drop of water to reset the parameters while the rest remain unchanged, only rearranged. Look forward to it, and support me throughout. It is not easy wringing the brain for a quality work, but with your encouragement, votes, stars, reviews, and praises, I won't disappoint.
Till then, try my previous books, or even the already completed "Love from the ashes".
P&L, everyone. I won't take long… I hope.
In the meantime, support the book below. I have finished it.
See you soon.
LDD.
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