I I'm posting this to let everyone know I use software as a editor, so that's why it feels weird. and it's also why I'm rewriting the previous chapters so I hopefully don't run into this again with the book. I've barely got a framework on the 1st chapter for the rewrite and i probably am not going to post anything for a long while as I kept getting complaints and I just don't feel like dealing with it right now as I have IRL problems and this book was supposed to just be for fun but it's turning into a hassle so please keep from posting replies reviews whatever saying how bad the book is I'm already rewriting the book
