It's really difficult, I smile bitterly.
Some new readers may feel that they are still an apprentice after reading for a long time, because - there are 250,000 free chapters. Although there are few chapters, there are many long chapters.
Thinking of this, I can't help but miss the days when I still had manuscripts saved up, and I could write according to the rhythm of the chapters, instead of publishing as much as I wrote.
As for the content of the second volume, according to the current level of completion, I can say that I have written what I wanted to write. However, because I am a novice/part-time worker, many parts are not handled well.
For example, the control of rhythm; the selection of chapters; the selection between plot and emotion; and then the character settings/motivations that were originally supposed to be named "Special" chapters were cancelled and directly mixed into the plot.
There is really no other way. Mainly because I have to keep up with the daily output, this is the limit of my ability. Objectively, I don't have time to polish it, and I don't actually have any drafts saved, so naturally I can't do a good job of breaking up the chapters, and I can't manage the rhythm perfectly.
Even so, you have continued to support me, and I am a little flattered.
If there are some parts that are not comfortable to read, I can only say that I am sorry. It is not that I don't want to write well, but I have really tried my best.
If I tried harder, I might die. I really tried my best.
If there are still some unsatisfactory aspects, I can only say sorry.
——About the structural logic of the outline——
Before I started writing Succubus Sword God, I had considered the audience of No Job. If I wrote a hardcore fan fiction about the original novel and started to throw out all kinds of original concepts, it might confuse the anime fans. You know, the anime has only been updated to the Academy Chapter (when the book was first published), not to mention the most exciting turning point 4 of the original novel.
So after comprehensive consideration, the story is set up as a confrontation between humans and gods in the dark, and on the surface it is still a fan-made love adventure novel advanced by the anime line.
It will be more appropriate.
This way both parties can get a good experience and it will also help the book survive.
To be honest, it is really difficult to write fan fiction about "No Job", as the world view is huge, the anime cannot keep up with the original work, the core selling point is not suitable for online literature, and the anime was banned for some reasons.
These are the reasons why most of the "No Job" fan fiction died suddenly, and the current success of this book is entirely due to your support.
Thanks again for your company.
——Plot: The Great Transfer——
So far, the audience of Succubus Sword God is still more likely to be anime fans. Even readers who have read the original work (including me) cannot remember many details of the plot because the original work is too long and contains a lot of content.
Here I need to briefly remind you of a piece of information, because it involves the main plot of the Royal Capital chapter - the issue of the Great Transfer.
The essence of the Great Transfer is that a future son of God, in order to save Akito (Nanabi's boyfriend) who was summoned as a hero and died, chose to summon Nanabi to the past and change the fact of Akito's death in the future. (What kind of victim?)
But the summoning failed. Only a crack in time and space was created - Rudy's soul squeezed in - reincarnation.
Rudy's existence changed the fate of the people around him. The world line changed, causing the space-time rift to continue to expand. The summoning magic was successful, absorbing all the magic power (matter) around, and then throwing humans all over the world at random, causing a major transfer disaster.
——Plot: Sorting out the light and dark lines, preview of the next volume——
The first thing that needs to be confirmed is that the story of the next volume is still the same as the previous two volumes. Even if you don't know this information, combined with my story structure and text, you will still get a decent reading experience, and it's okay to read it as a source of food in the fan fiction. But if you know it, the experience will be better.
——The obvious story line——
This is a cool and refreshing story (music) about the return of the soldier king, which is set in a Shura field. It is not difficult to understand and has some story elements.
——Hidden line combing and preview——
In fact, the article basically gives all the information. It's just a review. Below I will try to be as straightforward as possible in the form of questions and answers.
How does Alan's progress in changing the world compare to Rudy in the original novel? — Even better than Rudy.
Will the Great Shift be brought forward? ——Yes, and the monster tide that was brought forward in the first volume has already given a foreshadowing.
Does Alan know that he has a human god attached to him? ——He can't be completely sure, but the probability is too high, but he has been avoiding thinking about it because of the human god's mind-reading ability. He also suspects that the system itself is related to the future, but there are too few clues, and he only suspects Lala at present.
Did Alan know that the Great Transfer was brought forward? -- He knew. He had always known what the direct price of integrating into the world was. Under the premise that the human god was hanging on him and almost completely controlling his life, "gaining" itself already implied "price", just like old Rudy in the original book. Alan's situation was even worse than Rudy's.
So in the first volume, he kept trying to be a jobless person, not integrating into the world, and not having too many feelings with other people. But what the human god has given him is too tempting (family and love), and he is finally willing to join the game. (The excitement of the first and second volumes is this, the determination to do something even though he knows it is impossible. Combined with the scene where Xue Gu burns "Future Vision", does it imply just burning "Future Vision"? Who does the three words "Future Vision" represent in the original work? Why does the first volume keep talking about Future Vision? What is he really thinking? Who is he scolding in front of the human god, saying fuck Future Vision? Isn't it very clear?)
System tasks (tasks after the distortion of the human-god)? --Tasks follow the progress of Eren's reincarnation without a job, and progress in real time. Because its underlying logic is that the human-god constantly pushes Eren to change the world, monitor his future in real time, and make adjustments. Current progress: Eren and Roxy fall in love, prevent Lala from being born, and Rudy is marginalized.
Effect: Here is a question mark - if Lokisi and Rudy don't get together, will Lala really not be born? Will the future seen by the human god change? If there is no change, how should he deal with Allen and Lokisi?
Why is Allen obsessed with 'desire'? - Explore the possibility of 'desire', whether he can hide part of his own thoughts and fight against the human god.
Was it successful? — Success.
The next step is to try to avoid the adverse consequences of the Great Shift as much as possible under the watchful eyes of humans and gods when the specific advance time of the Great Shift cannot be fully determined.
The hidden plot of the next volume is the content of the game between the two sides. (Alan does not know the specific advance time of the great transfer, but the gods know.)
——
Finally, HE, no knives are given.
Thank you for your continued support!
(End of this chapter)
220. Chapter 213 Ariel's first appearance, the gears of fate begin to turn
220.
The Kingdom of Asura, as the human regime with the strongest comprehensive national strength in the world, stands on the western plains of the central continent. It has survived the great war between humans and demons four hundred years ago. It has a large population, is completely self-sufficient in agriculture, and has an extremely developed commodity economy.
The four top nobles of the Greylat clan are distributed in all directions to protect the royal capital.
The main roads connecting the various territories with the royal capital were paved with smooth stone slabs, a treatment only available to the main roads in the royal capital in other countries.
It's just normal in Asra.
"Your Highness, please."
".I will be very careful~"
"Hmm."
With a snap, the feather pen in Dilic Reitbart's hand was broken by him. He quietly looked at the word "ordinary" smudged with ink on the notebook under the candlelight, listened to the lewd sounds coming from next door, closed his eyes helplessly, threw the pen into the trash can beside him, raised his hand and pulled out the bra folded into a neat triangle from his chest, and carefully wiped his fingers one by one.
His posture was very elegant, and his long, smooth, dark brown hair swayed slightly on his shoulders as he moved.
Today marks the tenth month since he - Dilic Retbat, an outstanding graduate of Asura Magic School, was recommended by his father to serve as the guardian of Her Royal Highness the Princess.
Even though he was already accustomed to what he heard, he still found it difficult to connect the person next door with the very friendly and charming girl he met at the party ten months ago.
But fortunately, she only does this at night. During the day, she is diligent, sociable, and willing to work hard to improve herself, and she is a qualified heir to the throne.
Dilic froze.
The heir to the throne. Recently, the capital has set off another round of controversy over the crown prince, and the nobles have begun to take sides around the "candidates". Especially the first prince, who is older. Darius started supporting him two years ago, and the Boreas family has also placed their bets. Her Highness, she...
Dilic showed a worried look, and then a picture flashed through his mind.
A month ago, Her Highness was the first princess to walk on the bridge over the Altier River when it was being repaired. People flocked to the bridge - applause, cheers, and smiling faces.
Deafening.
Even though more than a month has passed, it seems to be still in front of my eyes.
Dilic smiled.
Don't worry too much, Your Highness has her own extraordinary charm.
".Ah. Your Highness, no."
Even though there is a nest of anti-Asura pioneers gathered in the Magic Academy, I have never heard any negative comments about Her Highness. This is the charm of Her Highness the Princess.
"Oh? Haha, what no? Explain clearly."
With this kind of woman, she will definitely become the leader of mankind after the Laplace War! Become a monarch loved by the people!
"Please."
He nodded, ignoring the increasingly persistent whining next to him, and carefully folded the used bra in his hand.
Thrown into the trash can nearby.
Dilic, a thirteen-year-old high-ranking magician from a local middle-class noble family, picked up his pen and continued writing.
The Kingdom of Asura is a land free from hunger. During the hundreds of years of peace, even if the nobles have gradually become corrupt, greedy, and continuously squeezed taxes from the people, as long as the people do not starve, dissatisfaction will not accumulate, and large-scale rebellion and civil war will naturally not occur.
However, this country is already stagnant. The research on magic and technology is progressing slowly, and it has been surpassed by the Kingdom of the Dragon King and the Three Northern Magic Kingdoms. Even if it still has an overwhelming advantage now, if this situation continues for another hundred years, what will happen?
The Dragon King Kingdom has always been eyeing the most fertile land in the Central Continent. If the three magic kingdoms come to invade, I'm afraid...
Dilic squinted slightly, and the candlelight danced on the lenses of his glasses.
The Kingdom of Asura needs the power of 'change'! There is no doubt about it!
The other princes are not qualified because they are too close to the nobles in their bid for the throne. If they become king, there is no doubt that Asura will remain corrupt as in the past. The ugliness and decay among the nobles will continue, and the development of the country will be hindered. One day, the country may even allow other countries to interfere in its affairs.
——Dongdong——
Dilic turned his head and looked outside the door. He blinked, was slightly stunned at first, and then his face brightened with joy.
He walked a few steps to the door and opened it.
Outside the door was a maid standing respectfully.
"Lord Dilic, someone is visiting late at night and is waiting in the living room."
"Okay, I'll go right away!"
"!!!"
Suddenly, a loud wailing sound was heard from next door.
Dilic and the maid were both stunned.
The maid blinked, her face slightly flushed, but her eyes were fixed on Dilic's slightly thin but handsome face.
The latter blinked, but pretended not to understand the maid's "eyes", and just coughed lightly.
"Go to the waiting room and prepare the tea."
".As you command, sir."
Separated by a wall.
The golden hair fell and spread out on the pure white bed like sunlight.
There are white lotus roots in the sunlight, and the blue eyes are like the lake in the back garden of the Silver Palace, with water vapor lingering and smoke waves flowing.
The corners of her mouth were slightly pursed on her soft oval face, making her look dignified, elegant and very approachable.
Below the neck, it was all solid color, without a single spot. The candlelight flickered in the gaps between the golden hair, creating undulating arcs of light, which was extremely gorgeous.
This is the "most beautiful princess of all time" who is praised as inheriting the beauty of the first princess of Asura.
True face:
Ariel stared at her 'prey' on the bed with a smile, leaned over and put her chin in front of the other's upper body.
He squinted his eyes and looked at the red face of the servant in front of him. His dignified and elegant posture disappeared like an illusion in an instant.
Only heavy ink and heavy colors remain in the eyes.
Her voice is full of natural affinity like that of a singing dove.
——Dongdong——
Ariel suddenly sat up, frowned slightly, and turned to look behind her.
The sunlight slid down and lingered over the delicate and undulating Baihe River.
Dilic's somewhat helpless voice was heard outside the door.
"Your Highness, someone is visiting. It's the person we promised you."
Ariel blinked, "Got it, Dilic, thank you for your hard work, please ask him to wait in the waiting room for a while."
"good."
She turned her head and looked at her hands which were covered with saliva, but evenly smeared on them, and took the servant's hand to pull her head up and pull her closer.
"Hurry up, and help me change my clothes."
"Woo"
In a few moments, Ariel had put on a proper palace dress. She looked at the servant in front of her with a smile on her face, and he stretched out his hand to lift her chin.
"Today's service was very good, it deserves a reward~"
As the attendant blushed, he gently touched her face.
Turn around and open your eyes.
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