This is gonna be the first chapter people are gonna see now cause...I'm changing a lot as of the time of writing this. Last chapter update was in like July or sumn this is nearly the end of November and I still haven't made an update. After reading a lot of books and becoming a certified hater worthy of feats to never be spoken of outside the GC....I noticed this book is a heaping stinky pile of ass.
I mean I don't blame myself. I was 17 (you still 17 bum) but at the time a lot of stuff seemed to make sense as of writing. The stuff I'm changing isn't too major I'm just removing previous chapters and rewriting them with actual comprehensible dialogue and characters and a story that makes sense. Character reworks and the plot itself was polished since I was just doing shit back then.
I'm still contemplating on whether I should change the pacing cause some things do need space to be explained but at the same time my dumbass can't stand slow scenes that are dragged out for no reason.
Yes. YES YOU One Piece! I'm looking at you!
Still uh.....the reason for my inactivity was really cause I was going on a path of patience and love with hatred to give you guys better content that can be stomached and not regurgitated cause of how much ass it sucks. Not cause I lost someone or was going through depression. (I mean both of those things did happen but....eh.)
I won't pretend to be some perfect author by writing some formal shit when I've barely started. Cause nowadays people are struggling to be real and people make every interaction with their community formal like they can't be chill.
Enough with the yapping. Hope you enjoy the book. If you find anything wrong with it or grammar errors my socials are open and so is the comment section so good luck with those. All right. Later.