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There's something wrong with the children

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In There's Something Wrong with the Children, a weekend getaway takes a dark turn when two couples—Margaret and Ben, and Ellie and Thomas—take a trip to a remote forest retreat with Ellie and Thomas’s two children. After a hike to explore a mysterious, abandoned military bunker, the children begin to act strangely. Their behavior grows increasingly unsettling—eerily calm, manipulative, and detached from reality. Ben, already struggling with mental health issues, is the first to notice the change in the children, but his warnings are dismissed as paranoia. As tensions escalate, he becomes obsessed with uncovering the truth behind their behavior. When the children disappear one night and return with no explanation, things spiral into a chilling battle of trust, fear, and survival. As the line between reality and delusion blurs, the adults must confront a terrifying possibility: the children may not be who they once were—and the danger may be far greater than any of them imagined.
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Chapter 1 - THERE'S SOMETHING WRONG WITH THE CHILDREN

"What if the children you loved and knew so well suddenly became strangers, with eyes that held nothing but an unsettling, chilling emptiness?"

Chapter 1: The Weekend Getaway

Margaret and Ben had been looking forward to this trip for weeks. A weekend away in the woods with their friends, Ellie and Thomas, seemed like the perfect way to unwind. They had rented a cabin on the outskirts of a dense forest, miles away from the distractions of the city. Ellie and Thomas had brought their two children, Lucy and Spencer, who were excited about the adventure. The first night was filled with laughter, s'mores by the fire, and stories about the myths surrounding the forest. But as the night wore on, a sense of unease settled in Margaret's chest. Something about the silence of the woods felt… unnatural.

Chapter 2: The Forbidden Ruins

The next morning, the children woke up before everyone else and begged to explore the forest. Margaret and Ben, still groggy, watched as Ellie and Thomas agreed to take them on a short hike. As they ventured deeper into the woods, they stumbled upon the ruins of what seemed to be an old structure. The children were immediately drawn to a deep pit in the center of the ruins, peering down with an unnatural fascination. Margaret felt a chill run down her spine as Lucy and Spencer whispered to each other in voices too soft to hear. When Thomas called for them to step back, they hesitated before reluctantly obeying. Something about the pit had changed them.

Chapter 3: The Children Change

That evening, the children were not themselves. They moved differently—quieter, more calculated. Their wide-eyed stares felt unblinking, their smiles stretched too far. Margaret couldn't shake the feeling that whatever had been in that pit had followed them back. Spencer, usually a boisterous child, sat still for long stretches of time, his fingers idly tracing patterns on the wooden floor. Lucy's giggles were hollow, lacking their usual warmth. When night fell, Margaret awoke to the sound of whispering outside the cabin. Peering through the curtains, she saw the children standing near the treeline, gazing into the darkness. And then they disappeared into the woods.

Chapter 4: The Descent into Fear

Panic gripped the group as they realized the children were gone. Ben and Thomas rushed into the forest with flashlights, calling their names. Ellie was inconsolable, gripping Margaret's hand with white-knuckled intensity. Hours passed before the children returned, stepping calmly into the cabin as if nothing had happened. Their clothes were untouched by dirt, their faces expressionless. When questioned, they only giggled and said they had been "playing." But there was something in their eyes—something old, something knowing.

Chapter 5: The Horrors Unveiled

As the days passed, strange occurrences plagued the group. Animals in the forest fell silent when the children walked by. Their laughter echoed at odd intervals, sometimes sounding in the distance even when they were inside the cabin. Margaret found odd symbols etched into the walls, spirals and jagged lines that seemed to pulse when she looked at them too long. The air inside the cabin grew thick with an unshakable dread. When Ben tried to take a picture of the children, their faces came out distorted, twisted into grotesque expressions that sent shivers down his spine.

Chapter 6: Escape

Margaret knew they had to leave. She convinced Ben, and together, they tried to persuade Ellie and Thomas to take the children and go. But Ellie refused. "They're just kids," she insisted, though her voice wavered with uncertainty. That night, Margaret awoke to a sharp sound—a wet, gurgling noise. When she entered the living room, she found Thomas lying on the floor, his throat slit. The children stood over him, their faces emotionless. Blood dripped from Lucy's small fingers. "He wouldn't listen," she said simply.

Chapter 7: The Pit Beckons

Chaos erupted. Ben grabbed Margaret's hand, and they ran. Ellie, in a state of shock, stayed behind, screaming for her children. The children did not chase them. Instead, they stood at the doorway, their eyes gleaming in the moonlight, watching as Margaret and Ben fled into the darkness. The ruins loomed before them, the pit gaping open like a hungry maw. The whispers rose, curling around them, urging them to look inside. Margaret fought the pull, but Ben… Ben stepped forward.

Chapter 8: The End and the Beginning

Margaret barely escaped. She ran until her legs gave out, until the sun began to rise over the horizon. When she returned with the authorities, the cabin was empty. There was no sign of Ellie, Thomas, or the children. The pit, once so prominent, was gone—nothing more than an untouched stretch of dirt. The only evidence that anything had happened was the bloodstained floorboards of the cabin. But Margaret knew. She knew the children had become something else. And somewhere, in some dark place, they were waiting.

Chapter 9: The Investigation

Margaret tried to explain everything to the authorities, but they were skeptical. The idea that two children could be responsible for such horror seemed unbelievable. The local sheriff promised an investigation, but Margaret could see the disbelief in his eyes. As the days went by, the story of the missing family spread through the town. But no one could find any trace of Ellie, Thomas, or the children. Margaret felt as if she was losing her mind. Every night, she heard whispers outside her window, soft giggles that sent shivers down her spine.

Chapter 10: The Return

One night, unable to bear it any longer, Margaret returned to the cabin. The forest was eerily silent. The ruins were still gone, but something felt wrong. As she stood there, she heard footsteps behind her. Turning slowly, she saw Lucy and Spencer standing just beyond the treeline, their eyes glowing faintly in the darkness. "We missed you," Lucy whispered. Margaret's breath caught in her throat. Then, from the shadows, more figures emerged—other children, their faces pale, their eyes filled with an unnatural hunger. And Margaret knew: the horror was far from over