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Chapter 4 - 4. The First Draft

Adrian

The council chamber was stifling with the smell of ink, dust, and too many egos pressed into one room. Adrian Vale sat at the far end of the oak table, quill in hand, his head bent over parchment. His words would never bear his name publicly — not yet — but he knew, with a certainty that made his chest tighten, that this draft would carry his fingerprints into history.

The bill was Lord Gray's idea: a sweeping reform of labor laws, aimed at curbing the brutal excesses of factory owners. Fewer hours for children, safer conditions for workers, penalties for the industrialists who treated human beings like coal to be burned. It was radical enough to enrage half the council but measured enough that Gray believed it might pass.

"Every line will be dissected, Vale," Gray said, pacing behind him as Adrian wrote. "Our enemies will twist words into nooses if we let them. Be precise. Be sharp. Above all, be clear."

Adrian did not look up. "Words are weapons. I intend to make every one of them cut."

Gray's hand came down on his shoulder, heavy but steady. "See that they cut the right throats."

Adrian worked through the night, fueled by black coffee and the fire in his chest. By morning, the draft lay complete: ten pages of clean, uncompromising prose. Gray read silently, his expression unreadable, until finally he set it down.

"You're dangerous," Gray said. "And that's exactly why I need you."

For Adrian, the words felt like a coronation.

That evening, the Hartwell sisters hosted a gathering in their drawing room. It was not unusual; their home had become a salon of sorts, where young politicians, writers, and artists came to trade ideas as eagerly as they traded gossip. Adrian was a frequent guest now, thanks to his rising reputation and Gray's quiet endorsement.

Emily greeted him first, as always. She pressed a glass of wine into his hand and leaned close, her perfume sweet and intoxicating.

"You're the talk of the city again," she said with a grin. "I heard you nearly made old Lord Camden choke on his cigar this morning. What did you say?"

"That the council belongs to the people," Adrian replied. "Not to the families who've clung to it for centuries."

Emily laughed, delighted. "And did Camden sputter like a tea kettle?"

"Worse," Adrian said, smiling despite himself. "He turned purple."

She slipped her arm through his and tugged him toward the piano, ignoring the raised brows of their guests. Adrian felt heat rise in his face, but he did not pull away. Emily's boldness was a kind of energy — wild, unashamed, impossible not to be caught in.

Evelyn

Evelyn, across the room, watched quietly. Her eyes lingered not on Emily's mischief, but on Adrian's hesitation.

Later, when the guests had thinned and Emily had disappeared into another room with a cluster of laughing friends, Evelyn approached him.

"You enjoy the attention she gives you," Evelyn said softly.

Adrian turned, startled. "I don't—"

Her gaze stopped him. Not accusing, but steady, searching.

"She's young," Evelyn said. "She doesn't understand what she plays with. But you do."

Adrian opened his mouth to protest, but the words tangled on his tongue. Evelyn stood so close he could see the faint shadow beneath her eyes, the quiet strength in the set of her jaw.

"I won't tell her to stop," Evelyn went on. "But I will tell you this: men who rise quickly attract many lights. Some burn bright. Some burn false. Choose carefully which you follow."

Adrian swallowed hard, his throat suddenly dry. "And which are you?"

Evelyn's eyes softened, just for a heartbeat, before she stepped back. "The one who won't let you burn yourself to ash."

Then she turned and was gone, leaving Adrian with the taste of unsaid words on his lips.

Adrian

Days later, the bill was unveiled before the council. The chamber roared with fury and applause alike. Industrialists thundered that it would ruin commerce; reformers hailed it as the first true step toward justice. Adrian sat at the edge of the chamber, silent but glowing, as Gray defended the draft with eloquence that masked Adrian's hand behind every line.

At one point, Sebastian Crowne rose, his voice dripping with disdain.

"This bill," Crowne declared, "is the work of an untested radical, hiding behind Lord Gray's good name. Albion does not need fiery children scribbling manifestos. It needs men of substance, of stability. This —" he lifted the pages as though they were filth "— is nothing but kindling for chaos."

Murmurs spread. Some nodded in agreement. But others — more than Adrian had dared hope — shook their heads. Crowne's words sounded tired, rehearsed, a relic of the old guard.

Gray responded with measured fire, dismantling Crowne's rhetoric piece by piece. And though Adrian never spoke, when the session ended, it was his words the newspapers printed.

That night, in his small rented room above a noisy street, Adrian lay awake, staring at the cracked ceiling. He should have felt triumphant. The city was whispering his name more than ever. Lord Gray had placed trust in him. The Hartwell sisters — one teasing, the other warning — had both turned their eyes his way.

But Crowne's voice lingered like poison: "An untested radical… kindling for chaos."

Adrian clenched his fists and whispered into the darkness.

"They will see. They will all see."

And far across the city, Sebastian Crowne sat in his own parlor, a glass of brandy untouched at his elbow, and promised himself the same thing.

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