This is the story of a young man who comes from zero to hero. This story can be uncomforting and it's a movie like.


it got some flashbacks and change of scenes, so I'll love a review that will help me to improve my writing.

this is the story line,


Akirion: The Awakening of a Young Warrior

In a quiet village miles away from the bustling capital, a young boy named Akirion leads an ordinary life with his loving parents. That innocence is shattered one fateful day when their home is attacked, claiming the lives of his family and leaving him heartbroken. Amidst his grief, Akirion discovers a hidden gift, his latent magical powers awakening at just ten years old.

Determined to rise above his tragedy, Akirion finds hope in a legendary swordmaster who trains young warriors in the art of combat and magic. With no wealth to his name, he earns his place through unwavering determination, living under the swordmaster’s roof for five relentless years. Through grueling training, he hones his magic and swordsmanship, forging himself into a formidable fighter.

Now, on the cusp of his destiny, Akirion prepares to confront the darkness that took his family,and to carve his path as a hero. His journey is one of loss, resilience, and the unbreakable spirit of a boy who refuses to give up.

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NOTE:This chapter continues from the last one. If you didn't read the last one, go and read it, then continue here.


Akirion continued his point by saying, "Yes, you only fought the last weak rank in the dungeon!" His eyes were gently closed, feeling the calmness of the surrounding floor.


Emily got her left brow quirked, glaring at Akirion. She asked, "Weak?"


"Yes, those are called the undead; they are strong, especially those 5 that were waiting over there," said Akirion as he pointed at the corner of the dungeon.


Emily: "Then where did they go?" she asked out of curiosity.


With a bit of hesitation, Akirion replied, "Ahh, I took them out!"


Emma: "Huhhhh?" Her eyes were fully widened, her brows quirked as astonishment filled her body.


Akirion calmly responded, "Yes, I did, and let's go, and you guys should stop whining, especially asking too many questions." said Akirion as he slowly started walking.


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