During the review of this work, I realized that some hand-to-hand combat sequences might have been confusing for readers unfamiliar with martial arts. Therefore, I reviewed these scenes mentally to better understand the execution of the movements and to improve my writing.
All techniques described are based on real martial arts movements, such as judo, jiu-jitsu, karate, and others. Some moves can be researched by interested readers as a reference for a better understanding of the fights.
Additionally, this work was originally translated literally from Portuguese to English. I will now continue adjusting the translation to make it more natural and fluent for native readers, without losing the original voice and style.
I have chosen not to modify the old fight scenes, as they reflect my growth and learning throughout the writing process. Future combat scenes will be refined following the improved standard of clarity and detail that I am developing.
I sincerely appreciate any feedback regarding the translation and the clarity of the text. This is my first work, and I am constantly learning and improving to provide the best possible experience.