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Chapter 16 - Small Note

Just a small note of clarification: besides the deadlines at work, I had to move to a new house, so I'll probably be able to start writing again by tomorrow or Monday.

Well, since I'm super tired, how about I share with you a quick read I had about the brainstorm for the chapter:

You want him to be badass and oppressive, charismatic, give room for relationships, and keep a reasonably manageable number of partners.

Anything beyond the plot, like trade, isn't much appreciated.

You also prefer, in terms of the army, less of him winning with many and never, under any circumstances, giving his advantages to others.

I suspect you'd rather see him alone making the difference on the battlefield.

You don't want me to do anything pre-canon that might feel long, it should jump straight into the plot and make things happen.

Did I get it right?

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Oh right, I have one more question. When I created him, I based his look on Henry Cavill in The Witcher, but nowadays that feels so cliché. Should I change his appearance?

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