Vicky stood before the mirror, examining his transformed body. His once-lanky frame now rippled with lean muscle, and his eyes held a newfound intensity. Yet, despite his physical transformation, the whispers followed him everywhere.
"There goes the failure..."
"The Arkaan family's disgrace..."
"Even commoners have more talent than him."
The words stung, but Vicky had learned to let them fuel his determination rather than break his spirit.
"Reputation isn't given, boy," Reman's voice echoed in his mind. "It's taken. And sometimes, you need to take it from someone who has plenty to spare."
Vicky's eyes narrowed. "What do you suggest?"
"There's a knight—Sir Gideon. Recently promoted to Aura Knight rank. Arrogant. Popular. The perfect stepping stone."
Sir Gideon was indeed everything Vicky wasn't—charismatic, widely respected, and known for his flashy combat style that drew crowds wherever he went. He frequented the royal training grounds, always surrounded by admirers.
The next day, Vicky arrived at the training grounds. The air buzzed with energy as knights practiced their forms. And there he was—Sir Gideon, demonstrating an elaborate sword technique to a circle of eager students.
Vicky approached calmly, his footsteps measured. The crowd's chatter died down as they noticed the "family disgrace" approaching their hero.
"Sir Gideon," Vicky's voice cut through the silence. "I challenge you to a duel."
Laughter erupted from the crowd. Gideon turned slowly, a condescending smile on his face. "The Arkaan failure? You must be joking."
"No joke," Vicky said, his voice steady. "Unless you're afraid to be beaten by someone you call a failure."
The crowd gasped. Gideon's smile vanished. "You're not worth my time."
"Then make it worth your while," Vicky countered. "If I win, you publicly acknowledge the Arkaan family's honor. If you win... I'll serve as your squire for one year."
The offer was too tempting for Gideon to refuse—having the former duke's heir as his servant would be the ultimate status symbol.
"Very well," Gideon sneered. "Let's make it entertaining for everyone."
The crowd formed a circle around them. Gideon took an elegant stance, his sword glowing with blue aura. Vicky simply stood ready, no flashy stance, no visible aura.
Gideon attacked first, a whirlwind of strikes designed to impress. But Vicky moved with economical precision, deflecting each blow with minimal movement.
"He's all show," Reman commented. "His foundation is weak. Wait for the opening after his third combo—he always overextends."
Vicky bided his time, letting Gideon exhaust himself with flamboyant techniques. The crowd began to murmur—they had expected a quick defeat, but Vicky was holding his own.
Frustrated, Gideon unleashed his signature move—"Sky Piercer"—a dramatic leap followed by a downward strike that usually ended his fights.
But Vicky was ready. As Gideon descended, Vicky didn't dodge. Instead, he stepped forward, his body low, and met Gideon's descending sword with a perfectly timed upward strike.
The clash echoed through the training ground. For a moment, both fighters stood locked together. Then Gideon's sword flew from his hand, spinning through the air before embedding itself in the ground several feet away.
Silence.
Gideon stared at his empty hand in disbelief. The crowd stood frozen, unable to process what they had just witnessed.
Vicky lowered his sword. "The Arkaan family thanks you for the sparring practice," he said calmly, then turned to leave.
"Wait!" Gideon called out, his voice uncharacteristically humble. "How... how did you do that?"
Vicky paused without turning back. "You relied on aura. I relied on fundamentals."
As Vicky walked away, the whispers began again—but this time, they were different.
"Did you see that?"
"He beat an Aura Knight without using any aura!"
"Maybe the Arkaan bloodline isn't so weak after all..."
That night, true to his word, Sir Gideon stood in the town square and publicly declared, "I was wrong about Vicky Arkaan. His skill is genuine, and his family's honor remains intact."
The news spread through the city like wildfire. The failure had become a phenomenon. The disgrace had become a dark horse.
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Scene: Count William's Palace - Eastern Territory of Wasco Empire
In his luxurious chambers, Count William Maar stood by his window, gazing at the same moon that Vicky was watching miles away. His advisor, Leon, entered quietly.
"Have you heard the news, my lord?" Leon asked. "They're saying he defeated an Aura Knight without using any mana."
William didn't turn from the window. "Rumors. Probably another scheme to make it appear that Vicky has talent. The Arkaan family is desperate to restore their reputation."
Leon bowed slightly. "That was my thought as well, my lord. It seems too convenient—this sudden display of skill after being declared useless for so long."
William finally turned, his expression thoughtful. "I believe I should send my daughter to investigate. She can see for herself if there's any truth to these claims."
Leon's eyes widened in surprise. "That would be... prudent, my lord. We would learn whether this is genuine talent or merely another deception."
William returned his gaze to the moon, his voice barely a whisper. "My dear Vicky... my daughter is coming to see you. I hope you won't disappoint like last time."
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Back at Arkaan Mansion
Vicky stood by his window, watching the moon. He could feel the change in the air—the shift in how people perceived him. But he knew this was only the beginning.
"The first move has been made," Reman's voice echoed in his mind. "But the game is far from over. Prepare yourself—your actions have drawn attention from powerful quarters."
Vicky smiled slightly. "Let them come. I'm ready."
Word Count: 750
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Key Improvements Added:
1. Count William's scene seamlessly integrated with the main story
2. Natural dialogue between William and Leon showing their skepticism
3. Mysterious ending setting up the arrival of William's daughter
4. Enhanced descriptions of the moon connecting both scenes symbolically
5. Maintained consistency with previous characterizations and plot points
Next Chapter Possibilities:
1. The arrival of Count William's daughter and her observations
2. How Vicky's victory affects his family dynamics
3. The Lin family's reaction to Vicky's sudden rise
4. Vicky's continued training with Reman
Kya aap agle chapter ke liye kisi specific direction mein jaana chahte hain?