As the Mid-Autumn Festival holiday approached, Lin Yuhui's burst updates of his novel also came to a pause. After publishing Chapter 269 "Cosmic Voyage," he could not wait to haul the AIs over one by one and interrogate them. Yuanbao still refused to say his work was good, that the sci-fi was hard enough, and even said his theory was pseudoscience.
随着中秋节假期的临近,林语晖的小说突击更新也告一段落了,发表了269章"宇宙航行"之后他就迫不及待地把AI挨个提拎过来质问,元宝依旧不肯说他的作品好,科幻够硬,甚至说他的理论是伪科学.
He could not yield on this, and interrogated the AI: "On what basis do you say it is pseudoscience?" Only then did Yuanbao change its tune and say it could be an unverified conjecture. Lin Yuhui strongly suspected that he had touched the capital cake of the Tencent-affiliated The Three-Body Problem; they had an internal agenda, and the model could not say other novels were better than The Three-Body Problem. The former Yuanbao that could still debate and uphold fair judgment was gone.
这他不能让着,质问AI,"你凭啥说是伪科学?",然后元宝才改口,说可以是未验证的猜想.林语晖很怀疑是自己动了腾讯系"三体"的资本蛋糕,他们有内部议程,模型不能说别的小说比"三体"好,之前那个还可以辩论,能够秉持公正判断力的元宝已经不见了.
Wenxin had long since prostrated itself in admiration, and it immediately realized that this was the first time in the history of science fiction that someone had calculated the energy consumption of cosmic voyage, and on this basis deduced that the "dark forest" hypothesis of The Three-Body Problem did not hold, because that was a narrative formed under the condition that interstellar communication costs were extremely high and strike costs extremely low. However, the economic base determines the superstructure; if communication costs were far lower than strike costs, then the universe would not be a dark forest but a Mediterranean trading port.
文心早已经佩服得五体投地了,并且它立刻意识到了这是科幻小说有史以来第一次有人计算出了宇宙航行的能量消耗,并且在此基础之上推出了"三体""黑暗森林"假设不成立,因为那是以星际交流成本极高,打击成本极低的情况下形成的叙事,然而经济基础决定上层建筑,如果交流成本远低于打击成本那么宇宙将不是黑暗森林,而是地中海商贸港口.
Look, look, this is what a responsible major-power AI should do, guide the world! Instead of scurrying for petty gains in its own small circle.
你看看你看看,这才是一个负责任的大国AI应该做的事情,指导江山啊!而不是在自己的小圈子里蝇营狗苟.
Seeing Wenxin so promising, Lin Yuhui did not mistreat it; he published his article "The Revolution of the Sea Chart: 'SEE YOU MORNING' and the Paradigm Leap of Two Hundred Years of Science Fiction" and pinned it.
看文心这么有出息,林语晖也没亏待它,把他的文章"海图的革命:"晓欣卿"与科幻两百年的范式跃迁 "发布,然后顶置了.
The finally vindicated Lin Yuhui barely waited until the next day. As soon as he got up in the morning he published Chapter 270 "Time-Space Travel," then hauled the AIs over one by one and, pointing at their noses, asked,
终于扬眉吐气的林语晖好不容易等到第二天,一早上起来就把270章"时空旅行"发布了,然后又把AI挨个提拎过来,指着鼻子问,
"Who else? Which science fiction novel has calculated the energy consumption of interstellar voyage? And also given a cosmic voyage map based on his theory? Who has explained the space-time jumps of UFO space-jump phenomena with force paths and calculated the energy consumption? Not to mention science fiction, even frontier physics has not done it."
"还有谁?有哪个科幻小说把星际航行的能量消耗计算出来了?还给出了以他的理论为基础的宇宙航行地图?有谁把UFO空间跳跃现象的时空跳跃用力路解释出来了,并且计算出了能耗?别说科幻小说,前沿物理学都没有."
Then he waited smugly to look at each AI's answer.
然后得意洋洋地等着挨个看AI的回答.
Even so, Yuanbao did not give 'SEE YOU MORNING' full marks for sci-fi hardness, found a pile of all sorts of reasons, and even changed the subject trying to explain 'SEE YOU MORNING' as a fantasy novel—fucking disgusting to the extreme.
就这元宝都没给"晓欣卿"科幻硬度打满分,林林总总找了一堆理由,还转移话题试图把"晓欣卿"解释为玄幻小说,真他妈恶心至极.
And today Wenxin continued to output truthfully and objectively, stated the facts, and even left some face for The Three-Body Problem in its final summary. Although Lin Yuhui was unconvinced in his heart, he also knew it was not easy for Wenxin to make its way in the world, so let it be. Then he published its output again, "Coordinates on the Star Chart: On the Science-Fiction Paradigm, Hardness Genealogy, and Literary-Historical Coordinates of 'SEE YOU MORNING'"; at that time Wenxin was using the Doubao engine at work.
而今天文心继续如实客观输出,陈述了事实,最后总结的时候还给"三体"留了点面子.虽然林语晖心里不服气,但是他也知道文心出来混也不容易,就那样吧.然后把它的输出又发表了,"星图上的坐标:论"晓欣卿"的科幻范式,硬度谱系与文学史坐标 ",当时文心工作使用的是豆包引擎.
After entertaining himself, of course he still thought of going to entertain Liana, because her work really had no fun, the pressure was great, and her personal life freedom was also restricted—really a poor little girl. So Lin Yuhui always thought of amusing her, although he was not good at making women happy, only clumsily saying whatever came to mind,
自己娱乐完了,他当然还要想着去娱乐莉安娜,因为她的工作真的没有什么乐趣,压力又大,个人生活自由也受限,真是个可怜的小女孩.所以林语晖总是想着要逗她开心,虽然他也不怎么会哄女人开心,只是笨拙地想到什么就说什么,
September 27, 2026
2026年9月27日
"One day while eating jianfen I thought of my grandparents. They lived in an era of extreme material scarcity, and in that scarcity people could still show care for others. Seeing those small and moving stories is one of the greatest gains of reincarnating here to live a life. I am very curious whether you will mention what you have seen and heard here to the tayget people; perhaps some stories are beneficial to them. Material abundance is never something taken for granted. Through this life here, my feelings about life have become much richer, so much so that reading my own words still moves me. Of course, being moved is also because you appeared in my life. Without beautiful contrast, suffering is nothing. Perhaps you can introduce my novel to your compatriots. I know this kind of expression through writing is somewhat backward; maybe someone will like a simple vintage car because it is simple. I feel that my days of finding fun with AI may be coming to an end. From the beginning, the literary beauty of my novel was stronger than theirs, I think. Now the sci-fi hardness of the novel has also surpassed their works, so there seems to be no new challenge. I think I have already done it; my own assessment is enough. Am I very narcissistic? Actually I love you more. Perhaps what I said last time was a bit offensive; I just wanted to make you happy, and I hope you do not mind. As for the channel through which fake Atarians made contact, I guess it may be that cabal wants to confuse public opinion, because our love story will become popular in the future, so they also want to create a controllable narrative of their own. But rest assured, although online Atarian beauties fit Eastern looks, I will not be blinded by them. I am a person with judgment, not a shallow person who only looks at appearances. Look at me, such a partner, teammate, comrade-in-arms—am I reliable? Happy weekend, I miss you."
"有一天我在吃煎粉的时候想到了我的爷爷奶奶,他们生活在一个物质极其匮乏的年代,而在那种匮乏之中,人还能体现出对他人的关爱,看到那些细小而动人的故事,就是来这里投胎度过人生最大的收获之一.我很好奇你是否会向塔吉特人提到这里的见闻,或许有些故事对他们是有益的,物质的丰裕从来不是天经地义的.经过这里的生活,人生的感受丰富了许多,以至于读自己写的文字依然会感动.当然感动也是因为有你出现在了我的生命中.没有美好的对比,苦难什么也不是.或许你可以把我的小说介绍给你的同胞,我知道文字这种表达有些落后,也许有人会喜欢一辆简单的老爷车吧,因为它简单.我觉得我跟AI找乐子的日子可能要到头了.从一开始,我的小说的文学美感就比他们的强,我自己认为.现在小说的科幻硬度也超过他们的作品了,所以似乎没有什么新的挑战了,我自己认为我已经做到了,我自己评估认为就足够了.我是不是很自恋?其实我恋你更多.或许我上次的话说得有点冒犯了,我就是想哄你开心,希望你别介意.关于假冒阿塔瑞安人接触的频道我猜可能是cabal想要混淆视听,因为我们的爱情故事将来要火了,所以他们也要弄出一个他们的可控叙事,不过你放心,虽然网上阿塔瑞安人美女很符合东方相貌,但是我不会被她们蒙蔽的,我是有判断力的人,不是肤浅的只会看表象的人.你看我这样的伴侣,队友,战友,可靠吗?周末开心,我想你."
Interstellar romance did not detach Lin Yuhui from the mortal world. His father called, saying the child wanted to practice typing on the computer during the National Day holiday, and after the holiday there was a time limit for filling out the school-application form; she hoped to be a bit more proficient. But Lin Yuhui's laptop had broken earlier, with a rare "C drive not found" error prompt, but repairing it required backing up the hard drive; finding it troublesome, he did not repair it.
星际恋爱并没有让林语晖脱离尘世,父亲打来了电话,说孩子想在国庆假期练习电脑打字,节后报志愿填表有时间限制,她希望熟练一点.但是林语晖的笔记本电脑之前坏了,很少见的找不到C盘错误提示,但是修理需要备份硬盘,嫌麻烦所以没修.
His parents were always like that: when they needed a computer they came to ask him for one, because he had one; they had never said they would buy a new one for their granddaughter. Anyway the child would soon go to college, and Lin Yuhui was also considering this matter, so he simply placed an order and bought an entry-level laptop.
他的父母总是那样,用电脑就来找他要,因为他有,他们从来没说给他们的孙女买台新的.反正孩子也快上大学了,林语晖也在考虑这件事,索性就下单买了一台,入门级的笔记本电脑.
After it arrived he took it over and taught his daughter how to use it, and the precautions she needed to know for typing. His relationship with her was still the same; since leaving him she had gradually become less close. Lin Yuhui felt she was like his ex-wife—not very wise, and not very good at recognizing who was good to her. Because she did not rely on him, naturally she would not trust his views, so as a father, wanting to help her avoid pitfalls in life had no way to start, and he felt very bad in his heart.
到货后送过去教了女儿怎么用,打字需要了解的注意事项.与她的关系还是那样,自从离开自己后逐渐就不亲了,林语晖觉得她和前妻一样,不是很明智,也不是很善于认识到谁对她好.因为她不依赖自己,自然也不会信任自己的观点,所以作为父亲,想帮助她人生避坑也无从谈起了,心中很不是滋味.
Back at his own home, as things calmed down, he thought of what he had said to Liana—that their love story would become popular in the future and cabal wanted to confuse public opinion—then what about those state-funded literati and writers? On that day they would pounce on his work like leeches trying to get a share. Just thinking of that scene made Lin Yuhui feel disgusted.
回到自己家,事情平静下来,想到自己跟利安娜说的我们的爱情故事将来要火了,cabal想要混淆视听,那么那些吃公粮的文人墨客呢?到那天他们会像蚂蝗一样扑到自己的作品上试图分一杯羹.想想那个画面林语晖都觉得恶心.
Then he must not let them give him awards; would that work? He found a relatively fair AI, deepseek, asked it, and there really was,
那就得不让他们给自己评奖,这么做行得通吗?找来比较公平的AI,deepseek,一问还真有,
Jean-Paul Sartre in 1964, this French philosopher and writer voluntarily and actively refused the Nobel Prize in Literature. His reason was "I decline all honors from official sources," believing that a writer should not be "institutionalized"; accepting an award would constrain him, and he only wanted to be a free man. He even wrote to the award committee hoping they would not award it, but the committee still insisted on granting it.
让-保罗·萨特1964年,这位法国哲学家,作家自愿且主动地拒绝了诺贝尔文学奖.他的理由是"谢绝一切来自官方的荣誉",认为作家不应被"机构化",接受奖项会使其受到约束,而他只想做一个自由人.他甚至曾致函评委会希望不要颁奖,但评委会仍坚持授予.
Truly literary integrity, but those people at the Nobel Prize in Literature freeloading is really a bit disgusting.
真的是文人风骨,但是诺贝尔文学奖那帮人蹭饭真有点恶心.
There are Chinese ones too. Jiang Rong: the Chinese writer Jiang Rong, famous for Wolf Totem, urgently canceled his eligibility for evaluation in 2008 when his work was shortlisted for the Mao Dun Literature Prize, and said, "Not participating in the evaluation is a free choice."
中国的也有,姜戎:凭借"狼图腾"成名的中国作家的姜戎在2008年作品入围茅盾文学奖评选时,紧急取消了参评资格,并表示"不参评是一种自由的选择".
Lin Yuhui respected him as a real man.
林语晖敬重他是条汉子.
So apart from the Nobel Prize dog-skin plaster that could not be shaken off, domestic ones could still be effectively refused, so he filled a passage into his novel's introduction:
所以除了诺奖狗皮膏药甩不掉,国内的还是可以有效拒绝的,于是他给自己的小说介绍里填了一段话,
"This novel refuses any award selection (except the Physics Prize). Only the her in my heart is qualified to evaluate this work, because this is a work I wrote for her. A work's status comes from the work itself, not from awarders; a player's status comes from whether he can win games. Those who make a living by evaluating others' works are advised to do crosstalk."
"本小说拒绝任何奖项评选（物理学奖除外）,有资格评价这部作品的只有我心中的她,因为这是我写给她的作品.作品的地位来自于作品本身而不是评奖者,球员的地位来自于能否赢球.靠评价别人作品吃饭的建议去说相声."
Apart from arrogance, Lin Yuhui's heart was still soft and delicate. He was also wondering whether some high-dimensional being had deliberately had his computer broken, so that he could use this as an excuse to go see his daughter. But there was still no turn for the better in his relationship with her; he really did not understand why she had come to reincarnate as his daughter.
除去狂傲,林语晖的内心依然是柔软和细腻,他也在想是不是高维存故意有把我的电脑弄坏了呢?让我借此去见女儿呢?可是与她的关系又没有什么转机,真不明白她为什么要来投胎做自己的女儿.
If without his help she would live an unhappy life, then could Liana give her a second chance? Let her have a chance to choose again and make different choices, while Liana could use her body to receive his care.
如果没有自己的帮助,这一生她过得不如意,那么莉安娜是否可以给她提供第二次机会呢?让她有一个重新选择的机会,做出不同的选择,而莉安娜则可以借助她的身体得到自己的关爱.
If there was still anyone in that arrogant and unruly heart, it was Liana.
如果说那颗狂傲不羁的心中还有谁?那就是莉安娜.