I've noticed that some of the recent reviews have been negative, and many of them come from readers who've only reached Chapter 15 or earlier. I completely understand that not every story is for everyone, but I do think it's a bit unfair to judge the characters or the plot too early on, especially before they've had the chance to grow.
This story was written with long-term development in mind. The characters especially Ada, are meant to change, mature, and evolve through their experiences. The person you meet in the first few chapters isn't who she'll be later on, and that's part of the journey.
Also, yes I do use AI to help me refine dialogue and shape ideas. Writing is a creative process, and these tools help me express my thoughts more clearly, but the heart and direction of the story are entirely mine.
I know updates have been slow lately, and I truly apologize for that. I've been really busy with school and other responsibilities, but I haven't forgotten about this story. I'll keep doing my best to continue it when I can.
To those who've stuck around and continue to support the story. Thank you so much. Your patience and open-mindedness mean a lot. I hope you'll keep reading and see how everything unfolds. 💙