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Chapter 46 - Chapter 45 — Long Takes

Summer's POV

By week three of shooting, the footage had piled up—hundreds of hours of quiet moments, each too precious to cut.

Summer sat in the editing room with three monitors running at once. On the largest screen, an old fisherman told a story about his late wife. His pauses were long—uncomfortably long by most standards—but she couldn't bring herself to trim them.

Every silence was heavy with meaning, she thought. Every breath told something.

"Too long," Ethan said from behind her.

She turned, startled. "What?"

He pointed at the timeline. "We'll lose viewers before he even finishes his sentence."

She frowned. "You want me to cut it?"

He leaned closer, hands in pockets. "Not all of it. Just a few seconds."

She folded her arms. "Those seconds are the story."

He sighed, not out of frustration but fatigue. "We promised real, not endless."

Her jaw tightened. "You sound like a network executive."

That landed harder than she meant it to. He looked at her—hurt flickering briefly before he masked it.

She turned back to the screen, pressing play again, pretending to focus. The fisherman continued to speak, his voice soft against the sound of the waves.

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Ethan's POV

He hadn't meant to step on her process.

He admired her sensitivity—the way she treated each story like something sacred.

But sometimes, he thought, reverence needed rhythm.

He sat down beside her quietly. On the screen, the fisherman's voice wavered with memory.

It was beautiful. But it also needed structure.

"Summer," he said carefully, "I'm not trying to simplify him. I just want people to stay long enough to hear the meaning."

She didn't answer.

He waited. "Remember what we said about honesty? It also means being honest about what works."

Finally, she exhaled. "I know."

He softened. "You taught me that silence can be powerful. I'm just saying—too much of it can drown the sound."

That earned a faint smile. "You and your metaphors."

He smiled back, relieved. "It's my thing."

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Summer's POV

They spent the next few hours rewatching, trimming carefully.

Each time Ethan suggested a cut, she winced.

Each time she resisted, he waited.

Eventually, they found a rhythm. A kind of gentle tug-of-war that ended in balance.

When the sequence finally flowed—still raw, still real, but tighter—she leaned back in her chair. "You were right," she admitted softly.

He didn't gloat. "You were right first. I just adjusted your right."

She laughed. "That doesn't even make sense."

"Exactly."

They both smiled, the tension dissolving as quickly as it had come.

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Ethan's POV

As night fell, the studio lights dimmed, and the monitors glowed like distant fires.

He watched Summer rewatching their edit—how her eyes tracked each frame with quiet devotion.

She was the heartbeat of this project.

He knew that.

And sometimes, when he got too caught up in pacing and audience, he needed to be reminded why they started this: not for efficiency, but for empathy.

"Let's keep one of the long takes," he said suddenly.

She turned to him, surprised. "I thought you wanted them shorter."

"I did," he said. "But maybe one stays uncut. As a statement."

She tilted her head, smiling. "A statement?"

He nodded. "That patience still matters."

She leaned back, eyes softening. "I like that."

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Summer's POV

Later, when Ethan left to grab food, she stayed in the editing room a while longer.

She scrolled through the uncut footage—the fisherman, the laughter, the quiet waves.

There was something sacred about seeing life unfold without interruption.

She marked the file with a small label: "Long Take."

When Ethan came back with dinner, she smiled. "I named it."

He peered at the screen and laughed. "Of course you did."

"Long Take," she said. "For the ones who stay."

He handed her a sandwich. "Then let's make sure it's worth staying for."

They ate in companionable silence, surrounded by the faint hum of the computers.

For the first time that week, Summer felt the balance return—not between chaos and order, but between heart and craft.

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Ethan's POV

Hours later, the final cut of that sequence played across the screen—no music, no edits, just the fisherman's trembling hands and the sea behind him.

Ethan glanced at Summer. Her eyes were wet, but she was smiling.

"Still too long?" she whispered.

He shook his head. "Perfect."

She leaned against his shoulder, exhaustion settling into something softer.

They didn't need applause. They didn't need proof.

They had found their pace again—slow, deliberate, honest.

And maybe that was what love looked like now:

Not fireworks or grand scenes,

but long takes that stayed beautiful simply because they were real.

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