You said:
Write a lookism fanfiction with Daniel park get's a system that gives life skills to Daniel park and make it slow progress and long chapters
ChatGPT said:
Alright. I'll start a slow-burn, long-chapter Lookism fanfiction where Daniel Park gains a Life Skills–type System, not an overpowered combat cheat. Progress will be gradual, realistic, and focused on growth, discipline, and consequences—very much in the spirit of Lookism.
I'll treat this as Chapter 1.
If you like the tone and pacing, I'll continue with equally long chapters.
LOOKISM: LIFE SKILL SYSTEM
Chapter 1 – A Skill Worth Living For
Daniel Park hated mirrors.
Not because of vanity—but because mirrors never lied.
The boy staring back at him was still fat, still slow, still weak. His school uniform clung awkwardly to his body, buttons stretched just enough to remind him that no matter how much he wished otherwise, reality didn't bend for people like him.
Bullies bent him instead.
The hallway buzzed with noise as Daniel walked with his head down, fingers gripping his bag straps too tightly. Every step felt heavy, like the floor itself was judging him.
"Hey, pig."
The word hit before the shove did.
Daniel stumbled forward, barely catching himself on a locker. Laughter followed instantly—sharp, cruel, effortless.
He didn't turn around. He already knew who it was.
"Don't ignore me when I'm talking to you."
A foot hooked behind his ankle. Daniel fell.
The sound of his body hitting the floor echoed louder than the laughter. Books scattered. His phone slid across the tiles, screen cracking as it stopped near someone else's shoe.
Daniel closed his eyes.
Again.
No dramatic anger. No righteous rage. Just exhaustion.
Someone kicked his notebook back toward him. "Pick it up."
Daniel obeyed.
By the time the bell rang, his hands were shaking—not from pain, but from humiliation. When the hallway finally emptied, Daniel stayed on the floor a second longer, staring at his reflection in the cracked phone screen.
Ugly.
Weak.
Useless.
That night, Daniel lay on his futon, staring at the ceiling of their tiny apartment. His mom was asleep already, exhausted from another double shift. The smell of instant ramen lingered in the air.
Daniel clenched his fists.
"I don't want to live like this," he whispered.
Not rich. Not popular. Not handsome.
Just… not this.
His phone buzzed.
Daniel flinched, expecting another message mocking him. But the screen didn't show a name.
Instead, it showed blue text.
[Life Skill System Initializing…]
Daniel blinked.
Once. Twice.
He sat up so fast the futon creaked beneath him.
"What…?"
The text didn't disappear.
[User Detected: Daniel Park]
[Condition: Low Self-Efficacy / High Stress / Poor Physical Health]
[Compatibility: ACCEPTED]
Daniel rubbed his eyes.
"Okay," he muttered. "I finally snapped."
He slapped his cheek lightly. It hurt.
The screen changed.
[Life Skill System]
This system specializes in non-combat life skills.
No instant power.
No shortcuts.
Growth requires effort.
Daniel stared at the last line.
No shortcuts.
For some reason, that made his chest feel tight.
A menu appeared.
[Available Skill Categories]
Physical Conditioning
Nutrition & Cooking
Learning & Focus
Social Interaction
Daily Discipline
There were no flashy titles. No "Martial God" nonsense. No strength stats or power levels.
Just… normal things.
"Is this some kind of self-help app?" Daniel whispered.
Another message appeared.
[Starter Skill Available]
Basic Habit Formation (Level 1)
Improves consistency by 3%
Reduces task avoidance slightly
3%.
Daniel laughed quietly.
"That's it?"
No answer came.
He hesitated, then tapped Accept.
[Skill Acquired: Basic Habit Formation – Lv.1]
[Note: Results require repetition.]
Nothing exploded. No surge of energy flooded his body.
Daniel felt exactly the same.
He lay back down, disappointed, embarrassed for believing even for a second that something would magically change.
"Figures," he murmured.
But as he closed his eyes, a small notification appeared at the edge of his vision.
[Daily Task Generated]
• Make your bed
• Drink one full glass of water
• Walk for 10 minutes
Completion Reward: +0.1 Skill EXP
Daniel stared.
"…That's it?"
He rolled over, facing the wall.
Yet something bothered him.
The tasks were… doable.
Painfully simple.
No running. No dieting. No transformation montage.
Just small things.
Daniel sighed and turned back.
"Fine," he said quietly. "I'll play along."
The next morning, Daniel woke up earlier than usual.
Not because he felt motivated—he didn't.
But because the notification was still there.
Unfinished.
He sat up, groaning, and looked at his wrinkled blanket.
Making the bed felt pointless. Nobody would see it. Nobody would care.
But…
He did it anyway.
It wasn't neat. It wasn't perfect.
But it was done.
[Task Complete: Make your bed]
EXP +0.03
Daniel stared at the message longer than he expected to.
He went to the sink, filled a glass with water, and drank it slowly.
[Task Complete: Hydration]
EXP +0.03
By the time he stepped outside for his ten-minute walk, the sun had just started rising. The air was cool, quiet—different from the noise of school.
Daniel walked awkwardly, breath slightly heavy. His legs felt stiff.
Ten minutes felt longer than he thought.
But when the timer ended—
[Daily Tasks Completed]
Skill EXP +0.1
Nothing dramatic happened.
But Daniel felt something unfamiliar.
Not confidence.
Not strength.
Just… completion.
That day at school, he still got shoved.
Still got laughed at.
Still avoided eye contact.
But when he sat alone at lunch, staring at his reflection in his spoon, something had changed.
Not his body.
Not his face.
But the thought in his head.
I did something today.
That night, the system updated again.
[Progress Recorded]
Consistency Streak: 1 Day
Reminder:
Small actions compound over time.
Daniel lay back, staring at the ceiling again.
For the first time in a long while, he didn't hate the mirror in his mind.
He didn't love himself.
But he didn't feel completely worthless either.
And for Daniel Park—
That was enough to keep going.
End of Chapter 1
If you want, next chapters can focus on:
Gradual physical improvement without sudden glow-up
Cooking and nutrition skills affecting health
Social skill growth (eye contact, posture, speaking)
System limitations and failures
Emotional growth before power
Just tell me how you want Chapter 2 to lean.
You said:
Restart and follow the main story
ChatGPT said:
Got it.
I'll restart completely, strictly follow the original Lookism main story, and insert the Life Skill System naturally without changing canon events. Daniel will not become strong early, and the system will focus on daily-life growth, not fighting cheats. Long chapters, slow progress.
I'll begin again with Chapter 1, aligned with the original opening of Lookism.
LOOKISM: LIFE SKILL SYSTEM
Chapter 1 – The Same Morning
Daniel Park woke up coughing.
The thin mattress pressed against his back as if reminding him—again—that comfort was expensive. The room was small, barely enough for a futon, a desk, and his school uniform hanging from a nail in the wall.
"Daniel," his mother called softly from the kitchen. "You'll be late."
"I'm up," he replied, voice rough.
He sat up slowly. His body felt heavy, sluggish, like it always did in the morning. When he stood in front of the mirror, he avoided looking at his face for too long.
Round cheeks. Messy hair. A body that looked like it had already given up.
Nothing had changed.
At school, everything went exactly as it always did.
The whispers.
The stares.
The laughter that followed him down the hallway.
"Hey, Daniel," someone snickered behind him. "You block the sun when you walk."
The shove came next. His shoulder slammed into the wall, but Daniel didn't react. Fighting back only made it worse.
By lunchtime, he was sitting alone, eating in silence.
Why am I even here?
The question echoed in his head the whole day.
That night, Daniel sat at his desk staring at his phone. Bruises bloomed faintly under his uniform sleeves. He hadn't told his mom. He never did.
He opened social media.
Perfect lives. Perfect bodies. Perfect smiles.
He closed it.
"I hate this," he muttered.
Not school.
Not people.
Himself.
Daniel lay down, staring at the ceiling.
"I just want… to live normally."
The room was quiet.
Then—
A soft chime rang in his ears.
[Life Skill System – Initializing]
Daniel froze.
"…What?"
Blue text appeared before his eyes, clear and unreal.
[User: Daniel Park]
[Mental Stress: High]
[Physical Health: Poor]
[Social Confidence: Extremely Low]
System Type: Life Skill Assistance
Purpose: Sustainable Self-Improvement
Daniel swallowed.
"This isn't real," he whispered.
He waved his hand. The screen didn't disappear.
Another message followed.
This system does not grant combat power.
This system does not alter fate.
Growth depends entirely on your actions.
"…Then what's the point?"
The answer appeared immediately.
Because doing nothing changes nothing.
Daniel didn't know why—but that sentence hurt more than any punch.
A menu unfolded.
[Available Skill Trees]
Daily Discipline
Physical Maintenance
Nutrition Basics
Learning Efficiency
Social Fundamentals
No strength stats.
No fighting techniques.
No miracles.
Just things he had failed at his whole life.
Daniel hesitated, then tapped the first option.
[Skill Unlocked]
Daily Discipline – Lv.1
Slightly improves task completion consistency
Effect is minimal without repetition
"…That's it?"
His body didn't change. His heart didn't race. He still felt tired.
Then a small window appeared.
[Daily Tasks]
Wake up on time
Wash your face properly
Eat breakfast
Reward: Skill EXP (Minor)
Daniel stared.
"This is stupid," he muttered.
But the next morning—
He woke up before his alarm.
Not because he felt motivated.
Because the task window was there.
Watching.
He washed his face slowly, water cold against his skin. He ate breakfast with his mom instead of skipping it.
[Tasks Completed: 3/3]
Daily Discipline EXP +0.1
Nothing happened.
But at school, something felt… slightly different.
Daniel still got shoved.
Still got insulted.
Still avoided eye contact.
But his head felt clearer.
His body didn't feel as heavy.
And when he got home—
[Consistency Recorded: Day 1]
Small effort acknowledged.
Daniel sat on his futon, staring at the message.
For the first time, change didn't feel impossible.
Just far.
Very far.
And somewhere beyond that distance—
Fate was already moving.
A night would come when Daniel Park would go to sleep…
And wake up in a different body.
But for now—
This was still the beginning.
End of Chapter 1
Next chapters will:
Follow Daniel's canon transfer decision
Keep the system active in BOTH bodies later
Make life skills affect health, posture, learning, and habits
Keep fights 100% canon (no system combat help)
Before I continue to Chapter 2, tell me:
👉 Do you want the system hidden from other characters completely, or should it cause subtle misunderstandings later?
You said:
Go with 1,3,4 and no one knows about system
In future Daniel park gates pyarelal thinking and make chapters long
ChatGPT said:
Perfect. I understand exactly what you want.
Confirmed direction:
✅ Follow main Lookism canon story
✅ System is completely secret (no one ever knows)
✅ Options 1, 3, 4 applied (slow growth, limitations, emotional + habit focus)
✅ Long, detailed chapters
✅ Future: "Pyarelal Thinking" mindset (strategic, disciplined, self-aware thinking — earned, not gifted)
✅ No early power-ups
✅ System never interferes with fights
I'll now continue with Chapter 2, keeping everything aligned with canon events (transfer, bullying peak, decision to run, etc.).
LOOKISM: LIFE SKILL SYSTEM
Chapter 2 – The Decision to Run
Daniel Park didn't decide to run away in a single moment.
It happened in pieces.
A shove in the hallway.
A laugh that lingered too long.
A teacher who looked away.
Each day added weight until breathing felt heavy.
At school, Daniel moved like a ghost. He wasn't invisible—he was ignored in the worst way. Seen, judged, dismissed.
"Hey, fatass," Logan Lee's voice rang out behind him.
Daniel stiffened.
Logan's hand landed on his shoulder, squeezing hard.
"You think you can walk past me like that?"
Daniel shook his head quickly. "S-Sorry."
Logan smirked. "Sorry doesn't fix ugly."
Laughter followed.
Daniel bowed, apologized again, and escaped as soon as Logan lost interest.
That night, Daniel lay awake, fists clenched.
The system window hovered silently.
[Daily Discipline – Lv.1]
Consistency Streak: 6 Days
Six days.
He had washed his face every morning.
Eaten breakfast.
Stopped skipping dinner.
Tiny things.
Yet the bullying hadn't changed.
The system didn't promise protection.
It never had.
[Daily Tasks]
Shower before bed
Prepare school bag
Write one sentence about today
Daniel stared at the last task.
"…Write?"
He sighed, grabbed a notebook, and wrote:
I was scared today.
That was all.
[Task Complete]
Daniel didn't feel better.
But he slept.
The next morning, everything broke.
Logan blocked the classroom door.
"You think you're funny?" Logan asked, holding Daniel's phone.
Daniel's heart dropped.
"That's mine," he said quietly.
Logan scrolled, then laughed. "Wow. You really watch this crap?"
The class watched.
No one spoke.
Daniel felt heat rise to his face.
"Please," he whispered.
Logan threw the phone.
It shattered.
Something inside Daniel cracked with it.
He didn't cry.
He didn't scream.
He walked home in silence.
That night, his mother found him packing.
"Daniel?" she asked, panic creeping into her voice. "What are you doing?"
"I can't stay," he said.
His voice didn't shake.
"I'll die here."
His mother froze.
Later, alone in his room, the system appeared again.
[Mental State: Critical]
Emergency Reflection Triggered
Running is not strength.
Staying is not weakness.
Survival requires choice.
Daniel closed his eyes.
"I don't want to be brave," he whispered.
"I just want to live."
The bus ride felt endless.
Daniel sat by the window, forehead pressed to the glass.
The city blurred past.
[New Environment Detected]
J High – Transfer Confirmed
That night, Daniel went to sleep in a new place.
And for the first time—
He dreamed of nothing.