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The Symphony of Organs Out of Tune (Oneshot)

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This short story was written for a competition—but it didn’t make the nomination list. Even so, I hope it still finds its way into readers’ hearts. Blending fiction, science, and metaphor, the story invites readers into a moment of crisis from an unexpected perspective. It is not merely about the body or illness, but about small acts of self-betrayal we often ignore, and a loyalty that works silently without ever being acknowledged. A story that quietly asks: who is truly exhausted from keeping us alive?
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Chapter 1 - The Symphony of Organs Out of Tune

The Fall of an Athlete, the Rise of the Body's Alarm

From the outside, everything looks powerful.

 The man runs, muscles taut, sweat scattering like sparks of victory. His breathing is heavy yet rhythmic. On social media, his face is an icon of motivation—a young athlete preaching discipline and a healthy life.

 But his body hides secrets the camera never captures. Every pull from his e-cigarette is not a "relaxed" lifestyle choice, but poison accumulating silently, like a ticking time bomb inside. Nicotine thickens along arterial walls, slowly narrowing the flow of blood.

 That morning, his steps are still firm. One-two, one-two. His calves pulse with strength, his lungs draw air, his heart works like a machine.Then—crack!—the rhythm shatters.

 His vision blurs. Knees buckle. The barbell slips, crashing hard onto the floor. In slow motion, his body collapses, face hitting the cold ground.

Shouts erupt.

  "Call an ambulance!"

 People rush in, panicked hands pressing his chest, CPR counts echoing—one, two, three… sirens wail in the distance.

But the most intense drama begins inside his body.

 Imagine a long flesh-lined corridor vibrating with each heartbeat. Dark blood flows chaotically, oxygen drops to 70%. At the end of the corridor, a massive conference room opens—wet walls, red lights flashing, medical alarms screaming without pause.

 The organs are already assembled. They are not mere machines; they are human-like. They have faces, emotions, even distinct personalities.

 The Brain stands at the front—a thin professor with round glasses. Hair disheveled, eyes razor-sharp. A pointer strikes the strategy board as his voice cuts through the room, heavy with scientific terms, no pleasantries.

  "Ischemia in progress! Oxygen supply is critically low. The middle cerebral artery is blocked. Without external intervention, total system shutdown… within minutes."

 The words hang like a judge's gavel. Chairs creak. Red lights sweep across anxious eyes, clenched fists, lips trembling to scream.

The emergency meeting begins.

***

A Heated Debate at the Emergency Table

Outside the body, the medical team races against time.

  "Press harder! Count of three!"

 Paramedics compress his chest repeatedly, artificial breaths are delivered, monitors chime with weakening lines.Inside the body, the emergency meeting descends into chaos. Red lights spin, alarms blare, the air in the room feels suffocating.

The Liver stands up, face wrinkled, eyes glassy.

  "I can't take this anymore… every night I work overtime detoxifying endless toxins. But the moment smoke comes in, all my work is wasted. Why does he torture me like this?"

His fist slams the table, shaking the entire room. The Stomach leans back, snorting dramatically, arms crossed like a diva.

  "Oh, please, honey… I haven't even finished digesting last night's steak. The morning coffee hasn't settled yet. And then—boom!—nicotine barges in uninvited. Do I look like an ashtray to you?"

He flicks his hand, as if brushing smoke off his clothes.

In the medical room, the heart monitor slows—beep… beep…A paramedic shouts,

  "Clear!"

 Electric shock surges through the body. The athlete's torso jerks, then drops again. The Heart rises, face ghostly pale. His voice is flat, heavy, like a worn-out engine.

  "I've pumped over a hundred thousand times today. I work without rest. But if one more stick enters… I stop. I'm not an eternal machine."

His grip tightens on the table, as if holding back his final beat. Slowly, the Lungs stand. An elderly figure in a white robe, breathing heavy yet calm. His voice is soft—but silences the room.

  "Every inhale is a dark cloud blocking the airway. I've endured storms for years. But storms never truly fade. And storms… always leave scars."

 Silence. Even the Liver, moments ago exploding, now covers his face. The Stomach falls quiet, exhaling deeply. At the podium, the Brain taps the board, struggling to maintain control as his voice begins to tremble.

  "We're running out of time. Oxygen has reached critical levels. Shutdown is only… seconds away."

Red lights spin faster. Alarms scream. Outside, paramedics shout,

  "One more time! Press! Don't stop!"

Sweat drips down their faces while the athlete's body hovers at the edge.

 Inside, the organs stare at one another—angry, exhausted, afraid. They know one decision will determine everything.

***

The Last Breath, the Body's Loyal Promise

The heart monitor screams—its line nearly flat.

  "Pulse weakening! One more time!" a doctor yells.

 CPR continues. Hands press the athlete's chest with full force, sweat pouring, oxygen forced through a mask. Inside, the emergency meeting nearly collapses. Red lights flash too fast, the air in the organ room grows thin.

The Heart slumps in his chair, pale as ash.

  "I'm… almost stopping. I need help from outside. If not… you all go down with me."

His hands tremble, pounding his own chest. The Liver sobs, staring at the Heart in despair.

  "Hold on! You're the only reason we're still sitting here."

Tears fall, mixing with stains of toxins clinging to his clothes. The Stomach tries to lighten the tension, though panic cracks his voice.

  "Please, don't die yet, darling. I still owe last night's steak digestion. If you stop… I'm bankrupt too!"

 He forces a laugh. It breaks. Everyone knows—this is no joke anymore. The Lungs rise, hands shaking, voice soft but firm.

  "I've held back the storm. But if the Heart goes out… I become nothing but an empty cave."

He closes his eyes, releasing a heavy breath, surrendering to fate. All eyes turn to the Brain. He grips the pointer tightly, glasses slipping down his nose.

  "We… could lose consciousness at any moment. Total shutdown is seconds away. All systems await one thing: whether external aid can reignite us."

  "Clear!" the doctor shouts.

The athlete's body jolts from the electric shock. The monitor—beep… beep…—the line rises again.

 In the conference room, the Heart jerks upright, blood surging back through the hall. The Lungs draw a long breath. The Liver collapses into his chair, crying in relief. The Stomach pats his chest dramatically.

  "Thank God! I can continue my culinary business, honey!"

But no one truly laughs. They all realize a bitter truth:No matter how badly their owner treats them, they remain loyal to keeping him alive.

 Outside, the man finally opens his eyes in the hospital. Oxygen tubes attached, body weak, face hollow. His gaze falls on a small table—the confiscated e-cigarette lies there. His stare freezes—shock, fear, regret.

The closing narration lands softly, yet hits hard:

 "The human body is the most loyal army. It fights endlessly, even when the greatest enemy is ourselves. But even the strongest army will never win… if the traitor is its own commander."

The lights in the meeting room go out, leaving behind a silence too loud to hear.

—End—