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Chapter 11 - Chapter 11 — The First Try

The field looked the same as it always had—dry, uneven, stubborn. If you didn't know better, you'd think nothing had changed. That was the problem with beginnings. They rarely announced themselves.

Raghuveer stood at the edge of Hari Prasad's land just after sunrise, the chill still clinging to the air. A crow hopped along the bund and watched him like it had business here. Somewhere behind the houses, a temple bell rang once and went quiet.

Hari arrived late.

Not careless-late. The kind of late that came from standing in your doorway too long, thinking.

"You're early," Hari said, setting his hoe down.

"Habit," Raghuveer replied. "Body wakes before the mind."

Hari grunted. He rubbed his palms together, then wiped them on his dhoti. "Let's finish this before the sun starts shouting."

They walked into the field. Raghuveer bent, picked up a clod of soil, and broke it gently between his fingers. It crumbled—not dust, not mud. Somewhere in between. Promising, if treated right.

Hari watched him. "You sure about this?" he asked, not accusing, just tired. "I've seen men talk big. Crop doesn't listen to talk."

Raghuveer smiled faintly. "That's why we're not talking much."

They began.

Hari made the furrows the way Raghuveer had shown him—wider than usual. It felt wrong in his arms, like wearing someone else's slippers. Every few steps, he stopped and looked back, checking the spacing again.

"This much gap," he muttered. "Feels like I'm wasting land."

"You're giving it breath," Raghuveer said. "Like lungs."

Hari snorted. "Fields don't breathe."

"They do," Raghuveer said gently. "Just not how we do."

Hari shook his head but kept working.

After a while, he said, "If this fails, people will laugh."

"They'll laugh anyway," Raghuveer replied. "Better they laugh while you're trying than after you stop."

That landed heavier than Raghuveer meant it to. Hari paused, leaning on the hoe.

"My father used to say," Hari murmured, "'If the well dries, people don't ask who dug it.'" He glanced up. "Means no one remembers effort. Only result."

"That's true," Raghuveer said. "But effort still keeps you alive till result comes."

They worked in silence for a bit. The sound of metal biting soil, steady and patient. A woman passed by with a pot on her head and slowed, pretending to adjust her balance while watching. Two children sat on a rock nearby, whispering.

At the compost pit, Raghuveer showed Hari how to layer it—straw, ash, kitchen waste. Nothing fancy. Nothing that needed buying.

"So I just keep adding to this?" Hari asked.

"Yes. Turn it every few days. Like you turn grain in storage."

"And smell?" Hari wrinkled his nose.

Raghuveer chuckled. "Smell means it's working. Life isn't polite."

Hari laughed once, short and surprised. It sounded like relief.

By mid-morning, others drifted closer. No one announced themselves. They just came and stood—at first far, then nearer.

Raghuveer noticed the change the way you notice weather: a shift in air.

A man from the next lane called out, "What's this? New kind of farming?"

Hari opened his mouth, then closed it. He looked at Raghuveer.

"You tell them," Hari said. "If it goes wrong, let it be your tongue they remember."

Raghuveer didn't mind. "We're trying to keep the soil alive," he said. "Nothing more."

"That's it?" the man asked. "No special seed?"

"No."

"No magic?"

Raghuveer shook his head. "If I had magic, I'd use it on my back first."

That got a few smiles.

A woman stepped forward. "Will it give more grain?"

Raghuveer didn't answer fast. "Not tomorrow," he said. "But it might stop taking grain away from the soil."

Someone muttered, "Everything takes these days."

Hari wiped his face with his cloth. "Look," he said suddenly, louder than he meant. "No one forced me. If this fails, it fails on my head. At least I'm not sitting and waiting."

There was a pause. Then an old man nodded once. "Waiting makes bones weak," he said. "Trying keeps them warm."

By noon, a boy overwatered one patch, and the water rushed off like it had been waiting to escape.

"Arre!" Hari snapped. "You'll wash it all away."

The boy froze, eyes wide.

Raghuveer stepped in. "Easy," he said. "Mistake is not crime."

He knelt, showed how to build a small ridge with the heel of his hand. The water slowed, then stopped.

"See?" Raghuveer said. "Water likes company. Give it time."

The boy nodded hard, like he was memorising a prayer.

Later, when the sun climbed higher, they rested under the neem. Someone brought buttermilk. Another brought two rotis, broken in half and shared without ceremony.

Hari drank and said quietly, "People are watching."

"Yes," Raghuveer said. "Let them."

"What if the tax men come?" Hari asked. "They see improvement, they'll come faster."

Raghuveer didn't answer immediately. He felt the old tightness in his chest, the memory of ledgers and stamps pressing down on lives.

"We're not hiding," he said at last. "We're surviving. There's a difference."

Hari stared at the field. "Same thing, if you ask them."

"Maybe," Raghuveer said. "But we can't farm according to their fear."

That evening, as shadows stretched long, a small green tip broke through the soil where millet had been planted earlier than the rest. It was barely there. Easy to miss.

A child saw it first.

"Ayo!" the boy shouted. "Something's coming!"

People crowded closer. Someone bent low. Someone else crossed themselves.

Hari crouched, careful, as if the shoot might break from his breath alone. His voice dropped. "It's too early."

Raghuveer smiled. "It only means the soil wasn't dead."

Hari sat back hard, dust rising around him. For a moment, he didn't speak.

Then he said, very softly, "If this lives… even half of it…"

Raghuveer finished the thought for him. "You keep your head above water."

They stood there longer than necessary, looking at that thin green line like it was a message written just for them.

That night, Raghuveer walked back alone. Lamps flickered behind doors. Somewhere a baby cried, then settled.

He felt watched—not by eyes, but by time.

He touched the red thread on his wrist and thought of how small things survived only if tended daily. Fields. Children. Ideas.

Behind him, the field lay quiet. Ahead of him, the village breathed—still hungry, still afraid, but no longer completely waiting.

And that, Raghuveer knew, was how trouble always began.

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