Here is the passage with a few hundred additional words of sensory and emotional detail woven in:
POV: Aphrodite
Fate doesn't warn twice.
I'm on my feet before the second tremor hits and my voice is already carrying through the passage before I've finished thinking the words. The sound of it surprises me slightly — how certain it comes out, how little of the fear underneath makes it through.
"Everyone up, we move now, go!"
