Chapter One: When the Drums Fell Silent
The world did not end with fire or thunder. It ended with silence.
On the morning the drums failed to sound, Elder Kato stood at the edge of the great square and felt the weight of years press heavily upon his chest. For as long as memory stretched—longer than stories, longer than names—the drums of Nambara had greeted the sun. They spoke to the ancestors, warned of danger, celebrated birth, and mourned the dead. Their rhythm was the heartbeat of the people.
That morning, the heartbeat stopped.
Mist clung low to the earth, curling around the ankles of those who gathered in uneasy clusters. Women wrapped their shawls tighter, whispering prayers under their breath. Warriors rested their spears against their shoulders, pretending calm while their eyes searched the horizon. The baobab tree at the center of the square loomed like an ancient witness, its scarred trunk carved with symbols of forgotten kings.
Elder Kato raised his staff, and the murmurs faded.
"This silence," he said, his voice thin but steady, "is not empty. It is heavy with meaning. The ancestors are speaking in a way we have never heard before."
A ripple of fear passed through the crowd. Silence, in Nambara, was never innocent.
Beyond the square, the river Zema flowed as it always had, indifferent to human worry. Yet even its waters seemed subdued, their usual sparkle dulled beneath the gray sky. Along its banks stood the palace walls—once bright with ochre and white clay, now cracked by time and neglect. The kingdom had endured drought, invasion, and betrayal,The Tears of the Old World
Chapter One: When the Drums Fell Silent
The world did not end with fire or thunder. It ended with silence.
On the morning the drums failed to sound, Elder Jul Reath stood at the edge of the great square and felt the weight of years press heavily upon his chest. For as long as memory stretched—longer than stories, longer than names—the drums of Nambara had greeted the sun. They spoke to the ancestors, warned of danger, celebrated birth, and mourned the dead. Their rhythm was the heartbeat of the people.
That morning, the heartbeat stopped.
Mist clung low to the earth, curling around the ankles of those who gathered in uneasy clusters. Women wrapped their shawls tighter, whispering prayers under their breath. Warriors rested their spears against their shoulders, pretending calm while their eyes searched the horizon. The baobab tree at the center of the square loomed like an ancient witness, its scarred trunk carved with symbols of forgotten kings.
Elder Jul Reath raised his staff, and the murmurs faded.
"This silence," he said, his voice thin but steady, "is not empty. It is heavy with meaning. The ancestors are speaking in a way we have never heard before."
A ripple of fear passed through the crowd. Silence, in Nambara, was never innocent.
Beyond the square, the river Zema flowed as it always had, indifferent to human worry. Yet even its waters seemed subdued, their usual sparkle dulled beneath the gray sky. Along its banks stood the palace walls—once bright with ochre and white clay, now cracked by time and neglect. The kingdom had endured drought, invasion, and betrayal, but it had never felt so fragile.
Among the crowd stood Ayo, barely seventeen, his hands clenched into fists he did not realize he had made. He had trained since childhood to serve the kingdom, to defend its borders and honor its laws. Yet nothing in his training had prepared him for a morning without drums.
"Something has broken," Ayo whispered to his sister, Nalia.
Nalia did not answer. Her gaze was fixed on the palace gates, which remained closed long after the sun had risen. Kings did not hide behind gates when all was well.
At last, the gates groaned open.
A single messenger emerged, dust-stained and trembling. He walked as though each step pained him, as though the ground itself resisted his arrival. When he reached the baobab tree, he fell to his knees.
"Speak," Elder Jul Reath commanded softly.
The messenger swallowed. "The northern watch has fallen. The border fires were lit, but no answer came. The armies of Kor-Lesh crossed the hills before dawn."
A cry rose from the crowd—part grief, part rage. Kor-Lesh had been an enemy for generations, a rival kingdom hungry for land and power. Treaties had held them back, fragile as dry leaves. Now even those had burned away.
"And the king?" someone shouted.
The messenger hesitated.
In that hesitation, the old world cracked.
"The king lives," he said at last, "but he is wounded. The council is divided. Some speak of surrender."
The word struck like a blade. Surrender was not merely defeat—it was erasure. It meant lost customs, stolen children, broken gods. It meant a future unrecognizable.
Ayo felt heat rush to his face. "We cannot surrender," he said, louder than intended.
Eyes turned toward him. Elder Jul Reath studied the boy for a long moment, seeing not just youth but the fire of generations reflected there.
"No," Elder Jul Reath agreed quietly. "But to resist, we must first remember who we are."
High above them, clouds shifted, and for a brief moment sunlight broke through, illuminating the carvings on the baobab—faces of kings, queens, warriors, and mothers. Their stone eyes seemed to weep.
The tears of the old world were falling.
And nothing would ever be the same again.
Done ✅ I've redone the chapter by changing Elder Kato to Elder Jul Reath throughout the text, and adjusted the dialogue reference so it reads naturally.
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