So like 16 chapters got deleted by accident again lol, but here is the general outline of what happened in those 16 chapter. I also included the list I use to keep track of all the general outline and stuff.
- Revan Shan finds Tanalorr, does not wake up Dagan Gera.
- Finds Zee and restores her/Makes her Admin of Tanalorr.
- Spends a few months setting up defenses on Tanalorr such as:
Talanorr(Fully Completed):
200 Power Generators/100 Air Scrubbers/100 Water Purifiers/100 Atmosphere Water Extractors/100 Grain Silos/100 Greenhouses with Force Plant Biological Data/2 Rakatan Thermal Array (Planetary heat Shroud)/Stealth shield array covering 60 main points of planet and 25 main points covering the Temple/Gardens/Dorms/Houses/200 Automated Intelligence Satellite Probes/Planetary deflector shield triple Strength/Mobile Planetary Ion Cannon/360 mobile orbital defense platforms/180 planetary turbolasers/10 Prototype Rakatan Power Cores pulling power directly from the sun and planet core/Encrypted kyber-quantum communication & computer array with a Jedi Signal repeater/10 Industrial Fabricators/200 MK2 engineering Droids.
- Finds the missing Katana a fleet, creates a new AI called Friday to automate it and station the fleet by Lehon.
- Meets a young Luthen Rael, sets up a spy network with him called the axis network.
- Makes, designs, and manufacturers some gadgets for Luthen and the spy network:
Axis Network(Luthen)/HQ-Antiquities Shop:
Encrypted kyber-quantum coms, Stealth Holographic Mask, Modified Westar 35 Blaster(Beskar/Phrik alloy,25% stronger,stun setting/Ion pulse).
Ship: 3x Fondor Haulcraft-V-21.1 Chevlex light haulcraft: 5 kyber/3 Rakatan power plant/Class 0.75 Hyperdrive with a class 4 backup,Sublight rating at 1100 KPH/Countermeasures: Side Kyber beams,Ballistic Chaff Launcher/Weapons: 2 forward laser cannons,Dorsal double laser cannon turret (hidden),Retractable antipersonnel laser cannons,Offensive tractor beam projector/Defense: Sovereign-class defector shields,Visual and digital Stygium stealth array/Kyber Quantum Computer with integrated Tactical Droid AI.(Name:Zero, Neo, Ghost)
- Creates another AI called Vision for the Axis network:
AI Vision Probe Satellite Network: (Stealth tech,Encrypted Kyber-quantum communication/Processing arrays,HG Phrik Alloy),6,500 deployed to communication grids on the Core,mid,outer rim worlds. That allows for spying through communication grids and it filters out what is important.
- Edited the bio-chips at Kamino to give Jedi 60s head start before execution.
- Saved Syfo Dias, saved Yaddle.
- Council knows there is a sith master.
- Start of clone wars, Geonosis battles.
- Has Yoda bring the clones early so over 100 Jedi doesn't due hopefully.
- Shan dismantles battle droids basically being a badass prodigal Knight.
- Gets his own clone legion/ships/equipment
- fight a few battles before going back to Coruscant for 2 extra legions and stuff.
- Original name: Revan Shan
- Pseudonym (Secret Identity): Dr. John Smith
- Biological Age: 136 years old
- Appearance Age: 23 years old
- Nickname: Prodigal Knight/Jedi Maverick
- Starts as a Jedi Knight, now Jedi Master
- Uses force techniques such as: force repulse/tutimimus/force judgement/Force Stasis/force heal/force push/force pull/battle meditation/force valor/force enhance/force jump/lightsaber throw/Force precognition/Force Storm/Force Barrier/Force light/Mechu-deru/force grip/force meld/force immortality/Force Stealth/Force Psychometry/Force Illusion.
- Uses Form VI Niman/Form VII Juyo/Form III Soresu/Form II Makashi/Jar'Kai.
- 2 Lightsabers with Kyber Crystals from the original "heart of the force" with special properties - The natural Red forged from the core and magma, The Balanced Purple - Full length with a handle made of Phrik and Beskar with leather for improved grip.
- Pair of Westar 35 upgraded with Kyber and the remade with Beskar/Phrik/Cortosis alloy for stronger power along with stun setting, capable to stopping a lightsaber and shorting it out.
- Sonic Screwdriver (Silver-Phrik, Kyber-Cyan emitter) - Opens locks, Diagnoses tech, programs tech, reads information.
Midichlorian Count: 23,000-Dense and a strong connection to the force from his long life and the heart of the force Kyber Crystals.
Personality: A mix of the 11th doctor and 12th doctor with the core of an adventurous spirit. Remembering and trying to live by the quote, "try to be nice and do good but never fail to be kind". Shan is funny, Sassy, sarcastic, and intelligent.
His personal ship named "Black Pearl" is a:
- "Black XS Stock Light Freighter" Upgraded with:
1. Hull Reinforcement: New Beskar/Phrik/Cortosis alloy chassis and panels for lightweight, strength, and energy conductivity
2. Automatic Stealth Generator: The Invisible Cloak was tuned with the navigation charts, allowing the ship to "mask" its presence by mimicking the background radiation of specific sectors. Full stealth package to spoof republic, Jedi, and syndicate signals.
3. Engine Tuning: The Class 0.5 Hyperdrive was recalibrated for "Jump-Snapping"—the ability to exit and enter hyperspace with zero warm-up time.
4. Hyperdrive and sublight engines significantly upgraded. Hyperdrive: Class 0.5, Backup: Class 1 and sublight speeds at 1800 KPH in Atmosphere.
5. Upgraded 4 hidden twin turbolasers/4 new stealth and frequency scrambling ion torpedo bays/2 forward facing upgraded ion cannon.
6. Upgraded kyber-quantum computers/processing array throughout the entire ship.
8. AI named Cortana who can help pilot the ship and help around as needed.
9. 2x Capital-Ship Sovereign-class deflector shields.
10. 10 kyber/5 Rakatan Power cell generator.
11. Pair of medical droids (Series 4) & 'Vintage' spice-latte machines.
12. 2x Sovereign's Command Chair-naps,caf/tea time,and encrypted communication with force probability to determine nap angle.
Personal droids:
-R2 - A R2D6 series droid with upgraded internals/weapons/slicer/assistant - upgraded to a Kyber-Quantum Slicing core. Upgraded thrusters and hidden blaster pistol hidden in its body. Its chassis was reinforced with a thin Beskar-alloy.
-HK 47 upgraded by Shan and rebuilt with Beskar-Phrik alloy. His combat sub-routines were updated with the Form VII Juyo data to use with a SaberStaff, pair of Westar 35s, Vibroblade, and a blaster rifle.
-Chopper (C1-10P) upgraded with beskar alloy/Kyber-Quantum Slicing core/Blaster/flamethrower/Electric Prod/upgraded thrusters.
-35 Sith Training Droids (Mark IV/V) - new beskar frame/upgraded holo projectors/new personality & directive core with all 7 lightsaber forms and data of multiple Sith Lords and Jedi masters.
-40 Marksman-H Remotes refit with beskar/cortosis alloy.
-Librarian Protocol Droid (M1-NR~Miner) - Kyber Quantum Core/Beskar-Phrik chassis/upgraded AI -Takes care of the recovered holocrons and various knowledge.
-Eleven (R2-B11 ): A kyber-Quantum core for efficient calculations, a encrypted communications relay with a Jedi Signal repeater,Beskar/Phrik alloy shell,4 extra control arms,a shock probe and stun barrel,upgraded thrusters,and a upgraded sensor package.
No romance
Follows the timeline: High Republic -> Sith Acolyte/Faces Qimir -> Facing Syndicates and Hutt Cartel -> before Naboo -> Naboo -> 10 years before clone wars -> 4 years of clone wars -> after clone wars/order 66-> 20 years of empire -> rebellion -> after empire falls -> new republic era -> Empire remnants such as Thrawn and Moff Gideon -> Search for the ancients/meeting Baylan Skoll-> New Order/Snoke -> Palpatine/Sith Eternal -> yuhzong vong -> New Sith Order
Armor is refitted from an old republic Jedi armor to something lighter to fit Revan's flexible fighting style. Using a weave of Beskar/Cortosis/Phrik alloy, form fitting body armor is both lightweight, energy resistant and durable. Lightweight shoulder pauldrons and knee protectors all made of Beskar/Cortosis/Phrik alloy. Colored black with red highlights.
The black robes use the Beskar/Cortosis/Phrik alloy as a filament weave.
Gloves are made with a Beskar/Cortosis/Phrik alloy weave, with a backplate of the same materials colored black.
Gauntlets have holovid, encrypted kyber quantum communications, remote black pearl ship controls, kyber quantum slicing tool. Made with Beskar/Cortosis/Phrik alloy.
Black Cloak with a larger hood to mask face, made of Cortosis/Phrik alloy weave for lightweight and defense against lightsabers.
The Original Mask of Revan, refurbished with Beskar/Cortosis/Phrik alloy,upgraded sensors using kyber-quantum scanning, connected to D6,Cortana,and the black pearl for real time scanning and maneuvers. Color: black, silver, and red(hidden until Clone Wars, locked in a Beskar Safe).
Cross referencing Star Wars terminology, lore, names, force techniques, Ship name & details, and timeline to ensure accuracy.
Do not rush the timeline and set the story at a slow pace for accurate events
15 Doctorates Degrees obtained during his days under the pseudonym John Smith:
1. Theoretical Physics
2. Planetary Ecology
3. Sentient Sociology
4. Advanced Engineering
5. Galactic Lore & Ethics
6. Advanced Dimensional Mechanics
7. Kyber-Quantum Informatics
8. Ancient Art & Archaeology
9. Advanced Mathematics & Logic Programming
10. Galactic History & Advanced Archaeology
11. Xenobiology and Biochemistry
12. Metaphysical Bio-Logistics & Quantum Sociology
13. Advanced Macro-Sociological Engineering and Ethical Infrastructure
14. Advanced Materials Science & Molecular Engineering
15. Extragalactic Astrophysics
- Revan Shan only uses feeling and trust when fighting with a lightsaber or using the force, not degrees. Revan knows to truly use the force you must feel. He is subtle in lightsaber combat and fully uses all his force abilities efficiently.
- Do not always mention his degrees in each sentences/paragraph, you can use the subject topic but not the degrees. (Added after Chapter 180 or so lol, sorry)
Important Loot:
Personal Holocron-(Adv Battle meditations/Force Immortality/Revan/Ancient Massassi Data-Crystals/Je'daii" Holocron/The Prime Jedi Inlay/Original Visions of the unwritten),Kashyyyk-Rakatan foundry-node,15 Kyber-Quantum Processing Arrays (Force-Probability),50 Industrial Fabricators (Force-Matter Manifestation),Amulet of the Void (Purified Kyber-focal crystal),6x Rakatan Memory Crystals (containing fragmented star-charts of the Unknown Regions),32 Purified Kyber-focal crystals,1050kg Beskar/Phrik/Cortosis,5 sith Holocron(Psychometry,Lore,Sith-Alchemy Transmutation,Force Illusions),Sith Star-Charts,2 Sith Kyber Lenses,4 Revanite Datacron,Hybrid Holocron,5x Path-Crystals(lost hyperspace paths),Lost Veins Datacron,Abyss Compass,3 High Republic Data-Cylinders:Containing Santari Khri's notes on dimensional mechanics,Fragmented Star-Charts:Detailing the Unknown Regions' gravitational anchors,Infinite Holocron-All Jedi Temple Knowledge,600kg Sith-era Phrik,22 Neo-Crusader Beskar-alloy armor,34 (HQ)Lightsaber Emitters,fragmented star-chart "gravitational anchors" Unknown Regions,Darksaber,Secret map-notes to avoid dangerous gravitational anomalies(Kyber Planet),Electro-Proton blueprint.
3KM 'Prodigal Knight' (The Harrower-class deadnought Flagship)-triple capital class shields, triple class capital ship deflector shields, improved Turbolaser Batteries x750, quad laser turrets x500, modified ion cannons x300, proton torpedo tubes x200, concussion missile launchers x200, Class .5 hyperdrive, Class 1.5 backup, and improved sublight engines powered by a 75 kyber crystal loop with 300 Rakatan power cells enough to power a large planet stabilized with 48 Kyber Resonance Stones compatible with a Axial Super Laser. A 'Vintage' spice-latte machines & Centurion Tactical Core.
With a legion of 50,000 HK51, 15,000 MK2 engineering droids, 5,000 repair droids, and 3000 R2-D2 Astromech. Currently hidden on Lehon in the half submerged ship dock.
The Safe House Project
Dr. John Smith's properties:
Corellia-High-rise apartment in Blue Sector-85BBY/Chandrila-Seaside villa-84 BBY/Bespin-Private mining platform 'Vapor's Edge'-83BBY/Eriadu-Industrial loft-83BBY/Mon Cala-Underwater dome in the outskirts-83BBY/Alderaan-Mountain lodge,High/Juran-82BBY/Coruscant-level 1313 penthouse-82BBY/Kuat-Orbital hangar-suite-81BBY/Scarif-Beach House-84BBY
Equipped with:5x HK51,hidden laser turrets,encrypted kyber-quantum computer/communications,food,Industrial Fabricator,water,clothes,and Blasters,Snipers,Slug Throwers,Gernades,timed explosives,vibroknifes,body armor,and Thermal Detonators.
Hidden Bunkers:
Naboo-Underwater bunker abyss -81 BBY/Nar Shaddaa-Sub-basement vault-80BBY/Hoth-Buried ice-base near Republic relay-79BBY/Endor-Camouflaged canopy Yawari trees-78BBY/Ryloth-Deep-cave sanctuary-77BBY/Ilum-Crystalline vault-76BBY/Yavin IV-Temple-subbasement-75BBY/Tatooine-Underground oasis/Rakatan Ecosystem-74BBY/Lothal-Abandoned transmitter tower-85BBY
Equipped with:10x HK51,5 hidden laser turrets,stealth array optical/digital,5 kyber/3 Rakatan power unit,Industrial Fabricator,Upgraded defector/thermal shields, food, water, encrypted kyber-quantum computer/communications,food,water,clothes,and Blasters,Snipers,Slug Throwers,Gernades,timed explosives,vibroknifes,body armor,and Thermal Detonators.
Planet Lehon(Hidden to everyone): 200 Power Generators,100 Air Scrubbers,100 Water Purifiers,100 Atmosphere Water Extractors,20 Silos,20 Greenhouses with Force Plant Biological Data,2 Rakatan Thermal Array (Planetary heat Shroud),6 Kyber-Quantum Processing Arrays (Force-Probability),Stealth shield array covering 21 main points of planet and 12 main points covering the villa,Foundry,and half aquatic docking bay,Automated Intelligence Satellite Probes,Planetary deflector shield triple Strength, mobile planetary ion cannons,360 mobile orbital defense platforms,180 planetary turbolasers.
Talanorr(Fully Completed):
Zee the protocol droid is the Admin
200 Power Generators/100 Air Scrubbers/100 Water Purifiers/100 Atmosphere Water Extractors/100 Grain Silos/100 Greenhouses with Force Plant Biological Data/2 Rakatan Thermal Array (Planetary heat Shroud)/Stealth shield array covering 60 main points of planet and 25 main points covering the Temple/Gardens/Dorms/Houses/200 Automated Intelligence Satellite Probes/Planetary deflector shield triple Strength/Mobile Planetary Ion Cannon/360 mobile orbital defense platforms/180 planetary turbolasers/10 Prototype Rakatan Power Cores pulling power directly from the sun and planet core/Encrypted kyber-quantum communication & computer array with a Jedi Signal repeater/10 Industrial Fabricators/200 MK2 engineering Droids.
Only accessible with the Abyss Compass attached to the Black Pearl.
X-Wing Starfighter "Star-Sass": Red/White/Black, upgraded sublight engines 2700 KPH,Class 0.5 hyperdrive, Class 1 Backup,4 laser cannons with sith kyber lenses/Industrial Plasma-Compressors,4 proton torpedo launchers with 12 torpedoes,2 front ion cannons,encrypted communications,8 Kyber/4 Rakatan power cells,stealth array with optical and digital spoofing,Beskar/Phrik/Cortosis alloy hull,kyber-quantum computer with a Cortana sub logic data patch,and a 2x Cruiser type deflector shield,Jedi Signal-Repeater.
Katana Fleet: 200 Dreadnaught Class Heavy Cruisers automated by Friday AI. Containing 2400 Alpha 3 Nimbus-class fighters/28,800 AP-PT walkers/gear for 6,000 soldiers.
(Chewbacca)-Kashyyyk
Pets(Loth-Cat):Calculus,Theorem
Former Padawan:
Jaro Tapal (Jedi Knight-Independent) - Shan gifted Jaro a sonic screwdriver, Beskar/Phrik/Cortosis Armor, and a modified and upgraded Defender-class light corvette.
-Has been a Jedi for over 125 years since the High Republic, everyone knows him as the maverick. Constantly trolling, making jokes, drinking tea, giving out lemon candy, and having adventures with a side of scavenging for loot.
Revan Shan's Allies: Mon Mothma, Bail Organa, Maz Kanata, Yoda, Yaddle, Jaro Tapal, Galen Erso, Cham, Hera, Luthen.
Order 66: Edited a year ago, instead of original words Shan had added that the clones would state intention, order originator, and 60 seconds before firing.
Axis Network(Luthen)/HQ-Antiquities Shop/Equipment: Encrypted kyber-quantum coms,Stealth Holographic Mask,Modified Westar 35 Blaster(Beskar/Phrik alloy,25% stronger,stun setting/Ion pulse).
Ship: 3x Fondor Haulcraft-V-21.1 Chevlex light haulcraft: 5 kyber/3 Rakatan power plant/Class 0.75 Hyperdrive with a class 4 backup,Sublight rating at 1100 KPH/Countermeasures: Side Kyber beams,Ballistic Chaff Launcher/Weapons: 2 forward laser cannons,Dorsal double laser cannon turret (hidden),Retractable antipersonnel laser cannons,Offensive tractor beam projector/Defense: Sovereign-class defector shields,Visual and digital Stygium stealth array/Kyber Quantum Computer with integrated Tactical Droid AI.(Name:Zero, Neo, Ghost)
AI Vision Probe Satellite Network: (Stealth tech,Encrypted Kyber-quantum communication/Processing arrays,HG Phrik Alloy),6,500 deployed to communication grids on the Core,mid,outer rim worlds.
Secret Credits: 7.8 Trillion credits in The Maverick Trust (Projected 500% return):
Accountant: Kaelen, Financial Planner: Vara, Investment Banker: Jax.
Moving assets into 'Stable Rhythmic Anchors' and Staple Enterprises.
Clone Retirement Trust: 245 million Credits (Projected 400% return).
Dr. John Smith's assistant: Sarah Jane
Office at Chandrila - The Maverick Research Institute: 1,400 tons of Cortosis, Phrik, and Beskar as well as weapon components.
Revan Shan's 596th Legion:
Lead Naval Commander: Admiral Kaine
Vice-Navel Commander: Vice Admiral Lara & Vice Admiral Spock.
596th 'Maverick's Roughnecks':
- Ships: 3 Venator I-class Star Destroyer: 'Sovereign's Grace', 'Uprising', and 'Phoenix', 9 Acclamator-class assault ships, and 36 Arquitens-class light cruisers.
- Legion: Clone Commander: Check and Ruff, 63,100 Clone Troopers & Crew, 3,008 Pilots(All clones are dechipped and free).
- Equipment: 120,000 DC-15A blasters, 400 AT-TE walkers, 120 ARC-170, 480 Z-95 Headhunter, 240 Y-Wing Bomber, 200 LAAT/I
- All ships got upgraded 2x Dreadnaught shielding, upgraded Class .75 Hyperdrive with a Class 1 Backup, upgraded power system, Cortana AI sub-process, Tactical core tactics uploaded for reference, and upgraded weapons. Clones got stronger armor, more explosives, and upgraded Blasters.