I need some one too profreed my writing.
Alldaine (sound as 'El' 'Du' 'yi' long 'ne'),
Gold - female ,the leader, time and 8 elements dragon . Real name "". Proficient in dual sword play
Red - male, space and fire and magma dragon. Real name "". Position in great sword.
White - female, mind and wind and lightning dragon. Real name "". Position in archery.
Iron - male, nature and metal and Earth dragon. Real name "". Proficient in halberd and everything that had used a cane.
Blue - female, mathematic genius, hologramic eye with water and ice dragon. Real name "Gaya" . Proficient in wipe.
Black - male, shape shifter and Shadow and light dragon. Real name "". Proficient in sword and shield.
Captain - male, The captain of the team, the boss snd ceo of the gaming company of " Alldaine", human, boxer. Real name " homer"
Ron- human,male, a monk, one of the game designers. Know as " Ronnel of tear". Space expert.
Kids
D - female, the agg gold had after coming to Earth, time and fire ,magma and air dragon. Real name " Elinor" . D Known also is "little D" stand for dragon for now her mother call her D as a nickname. Wepen like har mom and a wond for spell.
Phoenix- male, D future boyfriend and soulmate. Phoenix changeling, phone to a human Earth family had a phoenix soul, learning the special language of Alldaine. Usind a standard sword. Learning to transform to his best form and change changing just half of his body as Wings only or his hands.
His parents are " Morgana" ,and " Christopher" . An only child for now.
The game is just a small part of Alldaine. For the native it's look like a part that had dome and can't be broke into.
Phoenix~ has two variation, the more common are the normal it's just "monster", and the changeling phoenix are shown and despise by the clan.
Dragon ~you have a dragons is the monitor they usually the elemental strong and the like, there can be a lot of Virgin to on don't have wings and everything. And then there's the sub one that are called dragon slayers that are human that learn how to use dragon magic and there are some of dragon Clan is part of them are dragon that can change into human, the humans are going to slayer mate with a dragon had a dragon egg that mean the creature inside of the dragon but the bone is a human in a human body so it a dragon slayer. The dragon slayer Clan started from humans that learn from dragons to use dragon magic and because of that got a drago seed. When the seed fully mature, the human chenge into a dragon, the Dragonslayer Clan has Queen that had a time magic in the story called is technically the queen, she had a twin sister that keep the magic active the queen isn't the same bloodline they just have time magic that help the dragon slayers to return to be a human from dragon or keep it in check and this time desires learn how to do it without the time magic it's hard and it's dangerous. No if a dragon slayer learn from other dragons later they don't get the seat they can be gifted later by the dragon of the same attitude.
Black magician - magician is usually only a human occupation as the other races usually don't need spells and the like for casting they have innate magic someone that don't want to use the internet and learn called magician, black magician are magicians that use living life forces of other or mana to cast spells and arrays, let's make them different from others is the fact that the creature is still alive and to get the best and the highest magic and it's torture for the creature.
You can get magical ingredients from the creatures or been gifted then you won't be called "black magician".
Usually this kind of magician want to make their own Monaco by exploding the life and suffering of other cultures the most used are usually fixes as they are almost fully mana creature, and are quite weak as they are small. You can use dragons, phoenix's butterflies and everything but the amount of money and how much they are mana to Life force different and you need life force mana not regular mana to make a cure. Because the car is where you make the money you really use the man around you to content you condense it into the mana cure, it happened all the time.
To get life force mana you need the creature to be alive.
White magician- are magician that's been gifted amana call by other creatures, they called White magician because the gift mean they are contrasted and they'll loved by the one that gave them the total opposite of black magician.
If you've been gifted a call you you like keeping the the gifted of alive with you, a bone that everyone can see and it's mean you are a good person.
Picture can gift things like birds can give part of the federal that contain mana to other love the culture in the like and if you use the thing you don't count as black cuz you don't torture the picture it doesn't connect to the life force if you have form of silkspiderrow if freedom and you use the silk the web to make garment you don't nobody medical will hate you it's it's like you paying them if you use magic you force them you take out the intense dance and magic make it silk or use corrosion like torture on my magic inmate labels black and will be hunted.
Of course if you haunter or you get mentioned and everything and kill the creature and then use the thing like you killed a eagle and you need beak to make on enchanted necklace you won't count is black as you didn't tortured the creature, this is the world of the strong.
Semarit- 16 eyed humen look alike monster. 16 aye sockets around the bady and have 47 useable eyes to chenge. If an eye isn't news it can pretend to inside the body and heal it self. The eyes are used for portions and the future thing I for divination.
The different between the monster and creature
Monster or monsters like you think but culture monster with intelligent and ability to make trade thing and use the ability with conscious. Creature you don't have to kill to pass you may you use trade games on any other thing , monster won't talk with you it will attack you first or let's say like a lion if you don't disturb is pride you want you don't want to talk to you but if you disturb it will kill you won't ask you pay to get through my pride.