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Chapter 1 - First day at school

Here is your story with correct grammar, smoother storytelling, and the name changed from Warren to Werren. I kept your story style but made it clearer and more natural so it could work well for a webtoon script. 🌸

In a very elite school, after the break, students were talking in the corridor. Laughter and chatter filled the hallway. Among them was a girl with black hair tied in a ponytail. Her name was Claire.

Claire was the quiet type of girl. She rarely talked much and mostly kept to herself. While the other students chatted happily, she simply walked silently through the corridor.

The weather was beautiful that day. Cherry blossoms were scattered all over the school grounds, gently falling in the spring breeze. Everyone seemed to be enjoying the moment.

Claire looked outside the window.

"Hmm… it really is beautiful," Claire murmured softly while looking at the cherry blossoms.

She sat on a bench, quietly watching everyone around her laughing and enjoying themselves. But she didn't feel like she belonged there.

Soon, the school day ended, and Claire returned home.

"Ah… it was a tiring day," Claire sighed as she leaned back on her bed.

Her eyes then fell on a photo beside her bed. It was an old photo from elementary school. In the photo, Claire stood beside her childhood friend, Leo.

She gently picked it up.

"I wonder where he is now…" she whispered.

"He suddenly left school and didn't even tell me… or contact me."

She stared at the photo, wondering why he disappeared.

Her thoughts slowly drifted back to the past.

It was a beautiful spring day during her childhood. Cherry blossoms were floating everywhere, covering the schoolyard like pink snow.

"Wow… cherry blossoms! They're so beautiful!" young Claire said excitedly.

Her eyes sparkled with happiness as she watched the petals fall.

Then she noticed someone nearby.

It was Leo.

Claire looked at him quietly. Leo always seemed to live in his own world, rarely speaking to others.

Suddenly, the school bell rang.

"Oh no! Class is about to start! Let's go to the classroom," Claire said.

She quickly entered the classroom and sat down at her desk.

Suddenly, the students began whispering.

"Hey, Leo's here!"

Claire looked toward the door.

"Oh… it's Leo," she thought.

"He's so popular and smart… but he doesn't talk to anyone much. I wonder why."

As she was thinking, Leo suddenly looked at her.

"Oh no… I was staring at him," Claire thought nervously.

Soon, the class began.

During the school break, Claire was walking around the school grounds when she suddenly heard loud voices.

She turned and saw three boys bothering another student.

Claire watched them from a distance.

"I should call a teacher," she thought.

Suddenly, a voice shouted.

"Hey! Leave him alone or I'll call the teacher!"

Claire looked toward the voice.

It was Werren.

Eric smirked.

"Oh, look who's here… it's Werren. Are you trying to be a hero?"

His two friends laughed.

"Werren, stay out of this," Eric warned. "Or it'll be bad for you too. Got it?"

"I don't care," Werren replied firmly. "Just leave him alone, Eric."

Werren turned to the boy they were bullying.

"Hey, are you okay?"

"Y-Yes… thank you for helping me."

Suddenly, Eric shoved Werren hard, pushing him to the ground.

"Ouch!" Werren groaned.

At that moment, Eric's friend looked down the hallway.

"Hey Eric! A teacher is coming!"

Eric clicked his tongue.

"Let's go!"

The three boys quickly ran away before the teacher arrived.

Werren slowly stood up.

"Ouch… that really hurt," he muttered.

Suddenly, a hand appeared in front of him.

"Hey… are you alright?"

It was Claire.

She looked worried.

"You're not hurt, are you?"

Werren glanced at her for a moment.

"I'm fine," he said shortly.

Without taking Claire's hand, he stood up by himself and walked away.

Claire watched him leave.

"I hope he's okay… I was only trying to help," she thought sadly.

Later that day, the school ended.

At Claire's house, she sat quietly in her room.

"Ah… I feel a little better now," she said softly.

But then she suddenly remembered Werren.

"I guess he didn't need any help," Claire thought.

She looked down.

"But… why do I feel sad?"

The next day at school, Claire was sitting quietly in her seat.