NORA
The list went up at 9:07 AM on a Tuesday, because the universe had a sense of humor and Nora Chen did not.
She was standing in the English department hallway with coffee that was too hot and a paper that was three hours late when Priya texted her seven exclamation marks and no words.
Then a second text: ALDRIDGE FINALISTS ARE UP
Then a third: oh no
Nora didn't run. She walked. Quickly. There was a difference, and it mattered to her even if it didn't matter to anyone else.
The bulletin board outside Professor Aldridge's office was surrounded by a small crowd. Twelve people, maybe. Enough to make Nora's stomach tighten. She shouldered through, ignoring a protest from someone she didn't care about enough to look at.
The list was short. Two names. Printed on cream cardstock because Aldridge was the kind of person who thought font choice was a moral position.
ALDRIDGE PRIZE FINALISTS — SPRING SEMESTER
1. Nora Chen
2. Ethan Cross
Nora stared at the second name until the letters stopped meaning anything.
No.
No, no, no.
Anyone else. Literally anyone. She'd have taken Park Jiwoo and his unearned confidence. She'd have taken Rebecca Thornton and her overwrought metaphors. She'd have taken a random sophomore who'd never read Didion.
Anyone but him.
"Congratulations," said a voice behind her that she recognized the way you recognize a headache. Low. Unhurried. The verbal equivalent of leaning against a doorframe.
She didn't turn around.
"Chen."
She still didn't turn around.
"You're staring at the list like you can change it by force of will."
"I'm deciding how much of my morning this is going to ruin."
"And?"
She turned around.
Ethan Cross stood three feet away. Too close. He always stood too close, like personal space was a concept he'd read about but chose not to adopt. Tall enough that she had to tilt her head. Dark blond hair pushed back like he'd run his hands through it once and called it done. A black sweater that probably cost more than her textbook budget.
He was holding coffee too. Of course he was. Because even their caffeine addictions had to be parallel.
"All of it," she said. "You've ruined all of my morning. Happy?"
"Thrilled."
His mouth did something. Not quite a smile. The corner twitched. Like he was holding something back and wanted her to know he was holding it back.
She hated that. She hated that she noticed it.
"I assume you'll be withdrawing," she said.
"Why would I do that?"
"Because you don't need the prize money. You don't need the publishing deal. Your last name is on the library. You could submit a grocery list and they'd call it experimental fiction."
Something shifted in his eyes. Quick. If she'd blinked, she'd have missed it. The amusement dimmed. Something harder took its place.
"That's what you think this is about? Money?"
"Isn't everything, for people who've never worried about it?"
The hallway was quiet. The small crowd had dissolved. It was just them and the bulletin board and the three feet of charged air between them.
Ethan took a step closer. Two feet now.
"I'm not withdrawing," he said. "And it's not about money."
"Then what's it about?"
He looked at her. Not at her face. At her. The way he did sometimes in workshop, when she was reading her work aloud and thought nobody was paying attention. A look that felt like being opened.
"Read my submission," he said. "When it's posted. Then ask me again."
He walked past her. His shoulder didn't touch hers. But the air where he'd been standing was warm, and she stood in it for two seconds too long.
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ETHAN
He made it around the corner before his hands started shaking.
Stupid. That was stupid. "Read my submission" — what was that? What kind of answer was that? She'd asked a direct question and he'd responded with the literary equivalent of "come find out."
Because he couldn't tell her the truth.
The truth was that his submission was twelve pages of prose that circled a girl with dark hair and a sharp mouth like a planet orbiting a sun it couldn't touch. He'd written it in three days during winter break while his father lectured him about switching to business school and his mother drank wine and pretended the family was fine.
He'd written it because Nora Chen had read a short story in workshop last October. About a woman who folded cranes out of eviction notices. And something in the way she'd read it, the way her voice had dropped on the last line, the way she'd looked up with defiance already loaded in case anyone didn't like it...
Something had broken in him. Or maybe opened. He still couldn't tell the difference.
His phone buzzed. Marcus.
Marcus: saw the list. you and chen? lmaoooooMarcus: this is going to be a disasterMarcus: an entertaining disaster but stillEthan: It's a writing competition.Marcus: bro you literally stopped mid-sentence last week because she walked into the coffee shopMarcus: you forgot the word "metaphor." an ENGLISH major forgot the word metaphor.Ethan: That's not what happened.Marcus: i was there ethanMarcus: i was literally sitting across from you watching you forget language
Ethan put his phone away.
The competition ran for eight weeks. Eight weeks of shared workshops, mandatory peer review sessions, and a joint reading at the end. Eight weeks of sitting across from Nora Chen while she dismantled his writing with the surgical precision of someone who'd been sharpening knives since childhood.
Eight weeks of pretending he didn't want her to see right through him.
He walked across the quad toward the library. His family's name was carved above the entrance in letters two feet tall. CROSS MEMORIAL LIBRARY. Every time he saw it, he felt the weight of a legacy he hadn't asked for and couldn't put down.
His phone buzzed again. Not Marcus.
An email from Professor Aldridge.
Mr. Cross and Ms. Chen — please report to my office Thursday at 4 PM for competition orientation. You'll receive your peer review assignments. As this year's finalists, you'll be reviewing each other's work weekly.
Weekly.
Every week for eight weeks, he'd have to read her writing and she'd have to read his. Up close. With notes. With honesty.
She was going to read his submission.
She was going to see it.
The thing he'd written about a woman with dark hair who smelled like coffee and fought like she had something to prove. The way he'd described her hands. The scene where the narrator watches her read and feels like drowning.
It wasn't about her. Technically. The names were different. The setting was different. But the bones of it, the marrow, the thing that made it breathe...
She'd know. Nora Chen, who noticed everything, who read subtext like other people read headlines, who once called out a classmate for hiding a breakup in a metaphor about seasonal migration...
She was going to read it and she was going to know.
Ethan sat down on the library steps. The stone was cold through his jeans. His hands were still shaking.
Eight weeks.
He was either going to win the Aldridge Prize or destroy himself trying.
Possibly both.