Freshmen...
Although Miyake Chiaki debuted during his high school years, he is a gentle person who does not look down on any new comic artist.
And this Shimokawa is still young after all.
Mr. Miyake is known for creating works with suspenseful and profound storylines, as well as splendid combat scenes.
The comic genre that sells with a moe everyday life theme is not his forte.
However, with Miyake's ability, merely appreciating such works is certainly more than enough.
"Satoru's Indolence," this short comic, while having obvious flaws, also possesses unique highlights, and the story is quite interesting despite its imperfections.
For Shimokawa's first formal comic to achieve such quality, with proper nurturing and training, there is hope it can evolve from a flawed gem into a polished jewel.
Since he is here to review the work, Miyake will naturally approach it from an editor's perspective.
An editor must have a Discerning Eye.