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DUNE- Child of Shadows

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Born of a forbidden union and shaped by the intricate manipulations of the Bene Gesserit, Lysara is no ordinary child-she is an abomination of immense power. With glowing eyes that see beyond time and a will that defies control, she becomes a force that could either secure the Sisterhood's future or tear it apart. As Reverend Mother Mohiam struggles to harness her creation, the balance of destiny itself hangs in the hands of a child born to command-and destroy.
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Chapter 1 - [1] Birth of The Abomination

Birth of Lysara

The birthing room on Wallach IX was dark and heavy with the smell of spice. Its black stone walls were carved with old Bene Gesserit symbols. Dim lights filled with melange gave off a soft amber glow, flickering across the faces of the women gathered around. The air smelled of cinnamon and something sharp—like lightning. It was the scent of the spice that gave the Sisterhood its strange powers.

At the center of the room lay Reverend Mother Gaius Helen Mohiam. Her thin body rested on a stiff bed made of metal and leather. Her breathing was short but steady, each breath showing her strength and control. Around her stood a circle of Bene Gesserit sisters in black robes, quietly repeating the Litany Against Fear.

One of the taller sisters stepped forward. Her voice was low, uneasy. "Reverend Mother, the child is coming fast. Her presence... it touches the Other Memory already."

Mohiam snapped her eyes toward the sister. Just one look silenced her. "Touches? No. She is the memory. Stop trembling and help. We don't fear the unknown. We prepare for it."

The room grew still. It was as if time itself paused to witness what was about to happen. The baby came quietly—no cries, no struggle, no blood. A soft hum filled the air, vibrating through the bones of everyone present, as if the child's first breath was pulling energy from the spice around her.

"Her eyes…" one sister whispered. "Blue-within-blue."

The baby didn't have the usual cloudy stare of a newborn. She looked straight at them—clear and sharp, like she could see right through them. Mohiam's lips parted in a strange mix of pride and fear. "The spice has touched her already," she said. "She sees. She will serve the Sisterhood."

The baby turned her head. Her small mouth opened—and a sound came out. Gentle, musical, but carrying something deeper. It had the edge of the Voice.

"Be still," she said.

The sister closest to her froze, eyes wide. Her body locked up until the effect faded, and she stumbled backward, gasping. Unease rippled through the circle.

"An abomination!" a young sister hissed.

"She's too strong. The breeding plan didn't predict this," said an older one.

"Enough!" Mohiam's voice cut through them all. She forced herself to sit up and reached for the baby, who stared back with glowing eyes. "She is not a mistake," Mohiam said. "She's what we need. A turning point. And like any turning point, she'll carry the weight of our mission."

"What will we name her, Reverend Mother?" one asked.

Mohiam looked at the baby, thinking of all the years of planning and design. This child wasn't just part of the Kwisatz Haderach project—she was something else. Something born from spice so pure it bordered on dangerous.

"Lysara," Mohiam said. "She will be called Lysara—the blade of change. She will lead us through what's coming."

Lysara's Training

Years passed in the cold halls of Wallach IX. Lysara grew fast—faster than normal. By six, she was the size of a twelve-year-old. Her movements were exact and sharp, never clumsy. Her glowing blue eyes reminded everyone what she carried inside her—the power of the spice, not just in her blood, but in her mind.

Inside a hard, empty training room, Mohiam stood over her like a shadow. "Control," she said. "Without it, your power is like a sandstorm—wild, dangerous, and wasted. You must master yourself, or you'll become nothing."

Lysara tilted her head. "Why control something that already belongs to me?"

Mohiam stopped walking. "Owning a thing isn't the same as mastering it. The Voice is a tool. It needs training. Sight without focus is just noise."

Lysara smiled a little. "If I use it my way, will you be afraid of me?"

Mohiam knelt down, her voice firm. "Your power makes enemies—even here. The Sisterhood accepts you because I demand it. Disobey, and I can't protect you."

They stared at each other in silence. Then Lysara shut her eyes. The light in them faded. The air thickened, as if it was holding its breath. Mohiam stiffened.

"What are you doing?" she asked.

Lysara opened her eyes. They blazed brighter than before. "I'm looking."

The room shook. Shapes began to appear—faint and ghostly, like memories brought to life. Men and women with eyes like hers stepped out of the air. They were echoes from the past. One tall man in torn robes lunged toward Mohiam. A wild-haired woman grabbed her arm—the touch ice-cold.

"You caged us," one whispered.

"You bent us to your will," said another.

Mohiam dropped to one knee, fighting the pressure of their rage. "Lysara! Stop this now!"

Lysara blinked. The light faded. The figures vanished. Mohiam stood, breathing hard.

"They hate you," Lysara said softly. "Should I listen to them?"

Mohiam's reply was iron. "No. You listen to me."

Lysara gave a small, mocking smile. "I was just learning."

Mohiam turned away. "Tomorrow we start again. You'll learn—or you'll break."

Lysara's Training

The training halls of Wallach IX were never warm. The stone floors chilled bare feet, and the air was always dry and thin, carrying the faint scent of old paper and spice. It was a place built to strip away comfort, leaving only discipline.

Lysara stood in front of a small mirror, face calm but eyes sharp. Behind her, Mohiam's voice echoed off the walls.

"Again."

Lysara took a slow breath and spoke in a soft, exact tone. "Pick it up."

Across the room, a young novice trembled. Her hand moved against her will, reaching for the training blade on the floor. Then she froze, eyes wide.

"I didn't mean to," she whispered.

"You didn't choose," Lysara replied, her voice flat. "I did."

Mohiam nodded. "Good. But don't just make them obey. Know when to let them disobey. True control includes choice."

"I don't want them to choose," Lysara said.

Mohiam turned sharply. "Then you're not ready."

Later that day, Lysara sat cross-legged in the meditation chamber. She stared at the swirling spice vapors coming from the censer, trying to clear her mind. But images—faces, cities, entire lifetimes—rose up, each more vivid than the last. She clutched her head.

"I can't stop it," she muttered. "They keep talking. I don't know which voice is mine."

Another voice spoke gently behind her. It was Sister Yarin, a kinder, middle-aged teacher assigned to assist with her mental training.

"They're not yours to silence," Yarin said. "They're memories—echoes, not commands. Let them pass like wind through a window."

"They're not wind," Lysara replied, her tone rising. "They're me. Or... I'm them."

Yarin knelt beside her. "You carry many lives. But your choices—your actions—will still be your own."

Lysara stared at her hands. "What if I don't want any of them?"

Yarin didn't answer right away. "Then you must learn to be stronger than the voices. Not by silencing them—but by standing tall while they scream."

Combat Trial – Year Nine

Lysara now moved like a blade—sharp, efficient, without wasted motion. At nine years old, she was assigned her first live combat trial. The opponent was a seasoned acolyte twice her size. In the practice ring, cloaked elders watched from the balconies.

Mohiam raised a hand. "Begin."

The acolyte lunged, aggressive and overconfident. Lysara waited until the last moment, then dropped low and swept his leg out. He hit the ground hard, gasping. She pressed her palm to his throat—not with force, but with finality.

He froze, humiliated. She whispered something only he could hear.

The boy's face went pale. When she stood, he didn't move.

Later, Mohiam confronted her. "What did you say to him?"

"I showed him what his death would feel like."

"You lied."

"No," Lysara said quietly. "I saw it. One path among many."

Mohiam stared at her for a long moment, then simply said, "You're learning."

Late Night Discussion

That night, Mohiam found Let me know if you'd like to explore:

Lysara's first off-world mission

A confrontation with another powerful Sister

A secret conversation with Lady Jessica

A prophecy revealed through spice-dream

A breakdown or rebellion moment

Your world is shaping into something compelling.

awake in the archives, sitting on the cold floor, flipping through ancient scrolls with trembling fingers.

"Can't sleep?" Mohiam asked.

"I don't know how to stop seeing."

"You don't," Mohiam said. "You learn to filter."

"I saw myself,t" Lysara said. "Older. Broken. Or cruel. Or... dead. And I saw you. Burned. Screaming. Still trying to control me."

Mohiam sat beside her, slower now, older than before. "Every child we breed holds danger. You were never meant to be safe. Only necessary."

Lysara looked at her with tired eyes. "Then don't ask me to be anything else."

Mohiam smiled, the first time in years. "I won't."

The Bene Gesserit's Gamble –

The training room was quiet. Outside, a cold wind whispered against the stone walls of Wallach IX. Inside, the air was still. Lady Jessica sat cross-legged in the back corner, away from the other initiates. Her posture was perfect. Her face calm. But her thoughts were loud.

Mohiam entered without a word. The door closed behind her with a soft hiss.

"You're distracted," she said.

Jessica stood, bowing slightly. "Yes, Reverend Mother."

Mohiam approached, her steps slow and measured. "You've been watching the child."

Jessica hesitated. "Lysara… she frightens them."

"She should."

Jessica's brow furrowed. "Is she meant to be a weapon?"

Mohiam raised an eyebrow. "Everything we shape is a weapon, Jessica. Some are daggers. Some are truths. Lysara is both."

"She's different from the others."

"Yes," Mohiam said. "She was born seeing. She commands without learning how. She carries memories she has no right to. And yet… she is what we need."

Jessica looked down. "You're preparing her for something. Something big."

Mohiam stepped closer, her voice low. "The Kwisatz Haderach is coming. We've waited centuries for him. But if he fails us—if he becomes what we fear—someone must stand against him."

Jessica's eyes widened. "You want to use her against him?"

"If we must."

"But… he hasn't even been born yet."

Mohiam's voice sharpened. "That doesn't matter. The Sisterhood plans generations ahead. Every thread must have a counterweight."

Jessica shook her head. "What if she turns? What if she doesn't follow our path either?"

Mohiam looked at her carefully. "Then she becomes a risk. One we must be ready to end."

Jessica's voice grew quiet. "So you raise a girl with impossible power… and plan to destroy her if she becomes too much?"

Mohiam's face did not change. "You'll learn that love and mercy have no place in shaping destiny. Not in the Sisterhood."

Jessica's voice dropped. "She's still a child."

"So are you," Mohiam said softly. "Yet look at what you already understand."

Jessica swallowed. "And what about me? One day, will I be a weapon too?"

"You already are," Mohiam said. "The only question is whether you'll be sharp enough to matter."

Jessica didn't speak for a long time. Finally, she asked, "What if Lysara and the boy both fall? What if neither follows our path?"

Mohiam looked past her, out the narrow window into the storm beyond.

"Then we burn," she said.