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The Folded Places

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Space and matter exist here like any other. But a mysterious force warps the fabric of time, rendering existence precarious and ephemeral. This distortion creates an infinite loop of reality-bending scenes, each one more treacherous than the last. JM and his companions find themselves trapped in this ever-shifting landscape with no memory of how they arrived, forced to navigate the blurred lines between life and death as the distortions manifest the darkest fears of the world. Their only hope for survival lies in creating time in a realm where it has no set state, allowing them to survive another "Fold" and potentially escape this labyrinthine world. But as the distortions intensify, the stakes grow higher, and JM must now confront the truth of time itself and learn to understand it. warning: minimal Sensual scenes, graphic scenes, suitable for ages 13 and up Novel inspiration: Backrooms, dream core, Scarlett Johansson's; LUCY and Time trap (2017) Do people actually read these? A single comment will help keep the story running.
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Chapter 1 - infinite steps

​He woke up with a jolt, his mind reeling in confusion. His body felt heavy, unresponsive, as if weighed down by an invisible, crushing force. Despite the sudden awakening, exhaustion seeped through his bones, making his limbs feel like lead. He tried to lift his arm, to grasp something, anything, but his body refused to cooperate. His brain was a jumbled mess, overwhelmed by the sheer volume of information flooding his senses.

​Everything was visible, yet nothing was clear. It was as if his mind was trying to process an infinite amount of data, each piece fighting for attention—distances overlapping, spatial coordinates canceling each other out, and the unsettling sensation of vast, unmeasured epochs of time pressing down on his skull at once.

The sensation was dizzying, like being shown an endless, shifting blueprint that refused to hold a single shape.

​And then, suddenly, he snapped back into focus. The overwhelming influx collapsed inward, and the world around him coalesced into sharp relief.

​He sat up, gasping, and looked around. A sea of green grass stretched out before him, swaying gently in a breeze that carried no smell, no moisture, and no temperature. There were no buildings, no trees, no structures of any kind—just the endless expanse of grass under a featureless sky.

​He stumbled to his feet, his brain struggling to make sense of his surroundings. As he walked, his mind worked to piece together fragments of information. But the more he walked, the more he realized that something was terribly wrong. He didn't know where he was. He didn't know who he was. His memories seemed to be gone, replaced by a hollow, echoing void.

​All he knew was basic movement. His brain seemed configured to respond to fundamental commands—walk, stand, sit—but anything beyond that was a mystery. Panic began to set in as he realized the extent of his amnesia. He looked down at his hands, foreign and unfamiliar, and wondered who he was, where he came from, and why he was here. The only certainty was the soft grass beneath his feet and the vast, empty landscape stretching out before him.

​He opened his mouth, feeling the familiar sensation of his vocal cords vibrating, his throat releasing air, and his tongue shaping sounds into words. But as he listened, he realized that no sound was escaping his lips. The silence was absolute, a jarring disconnect between the physical effort in his throat and the absence of noise outside it.

​In his mind, however, thoughts flowed freely. He was thinking in a language, but what language was it? He couldn't quite grasp the specifics, but the words and concepts felt familiar, like a distant, faded memory. Yet, when he tried to translate those thoughts into spoken words, the air seemed to absorb them, leaving them trapped inside his mind.

​The frustration was palpable. He knew what he wanted to say, but the words wouldn't emerge. The disconnection between his thoughts and his ability to express them was maddening, a constant reminder of his isolation.

​He walked, his feet carrying him forward with a sense of determination. But as he traversed the vast expanse of grass, he realized that nothing was changing. The same scene unfolded before him—endless green blades swaying gently in the breeze, a vast sky above, and an unsettling emptiness beyond that. No landmarks, no features, no horizon line. Just grass and sky, repeating infinitely.

​He tried to change direction, to break the monotony of his walk. But as he stood still, attempting to get his bearings, he felt a strange disorientation.

Everything seemed to centralize around him, as if he were the axis of a spinning wheel. There was no sense of left or right, no concept of north or south. The cardinal directions he'd always taken for granted had melted away, leaving him in absolute confusion.

​The flow of information in his mind spiked again—a realization dawning on him. There are no directions here. The grassy expanse wasn't just a flat plane; it was a closed loop. A paradox where walking in a straight line simply carried him along the outer loop of a folded space.

​He looked up at the sky, a growing sense of unease taking root. There was no sun, no clouds, no light source of any kind. The sky was a perfect, unbroken expanse of nothingness. Yet the field was evenly illuminated from every angle, leaving no shadows beneath his feet. The discrepancy was jarring, making his head spin.

​He sat down, feeling the weight of hopelessness settle in. He felt like he'd been walking for hours, but when he tried to measure it, a cold instinct in his mind insisted it had only been two minutes.

​Leaping to his feet, he tried to test the space by walking backward.

​As he looked back, he saw a figure in the distance walking toward him. The figure was identical to him, mirror-like in its stride. As he gazed deeper, he saw another version of himself behind it, and another, and another. The reflections stretched out infinitely—a dizzying corridor of identical faces.

​It wasn't a line of strangers or clones. It was his own body, catching up to the spatial points he had just occupied, time looping back on itself because the space had nowhere forward to go.

​Suddenly, the space between the reflections fractured, shattering like glass into a thousand pieces. The fragments dissolved, leaving only one identical figure standing a short distance away.

​The version of himself was looking straight back at him. It was no longer mimicking his movements. The distance between them began to shrink, the other version moving closer with an unnerving, steady pace. Their eyes remained locked, a sense of foreboding building in his chest as he realized the figure was moving independently.

​And then, just as the other him reached out, stepping directly into his physical space to overlap with his form, everything froze.

​The air turned solid. The grass locked in place. The world seemed to hold its breath, suspended in an eternal moment of uncertainty, poised on the brink of something monumental as he waited for the world to snap back into motion.