I've seen the comments from yesterday, and it's clear my writing has ruffled some feathers. To be completely honest, I didn't know my words could make readers feel such strong anger. While that wasn't the specific emotion I was aiming for when I started this journey, I have to acknowledge that it is a powerful one... it means the story has touched a nerve, and you are deeply invested in Mateo's fate.
And for that, I am genuinely thankful. Thank you for caring enough about Mateo to feel frustrated and angry on his behalf. That connection is the most important thing an author can hope for.
When I began this novel, the very first question I asked myself wasn't "What cool things will he do?" but "How can I make readers feel his dream in their bones, so that his eventual triumph is not just a victory, but also root for him along the way?"