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My Mind Control System

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Dying on his way to visit his younger siblings, a boy is reincarnated into a fantasy world where he has the the ultimate mind control ability
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Chapter 1 - CHAPTER 1: DOMINUS

On my way to visit the twins, who were in the hospital due to a terminal illness they had contracted at birth. My trip ended with me being a bloodstain on the pavement, as a car drove into me at what had to be the speed of sound.

That was the day, Solar Vale, died on earth.

-

I stood in a peerless white void. At first I couldn't see anything. But as I focused on the void I was standing on, I was finally met with the image of how I looked that day.

"Is this the afterlife?" I blurted out, as I watched a constant playback of me getting ready to go visit my little brother. Everything in my room was in order, for the first time in years I had managed to leave my room spotless before I left. I was never a messy person but I always managed to have a clean shirt or hoodie left on the ground whenever I headed out somewhere. It was my weird luck, I guess I should've known today would've been the day I died. Since it was the first time I had my room looking the way I wanted too.

[Technically you died yesterday viewer.]

A voice called out, it didn't seem like it came from a person though. If anything it felt like it was the room. This peerless white void was talking to me, in the voice of a cute girl, with a tone of … Divinity?

[Yes you can call me Void Chan! The bridge above time that sits between here and another world!]

"Void Chan? Are you Japanese or a Weeb?"

Even though it didn't have a body and wasn't a person, I felt like the void was annoyed by my question about its cultural appropriation.

[Void Chan is everything that is in nothing Viewer]

"That doesn't make sens-"

[ Ha I guess your brain ability can't understand Viewer.]

The void bellowed in a haughty tone

"Right, because it's my brains fault that a void wants to impersonate a japanese school girl despite being literally nothingness"

The void, blushed??

[I- I've never had someone call me nothingness before. Are you the one for Void Chan?]

"..."

[A girl can't have jokes anymore] The void let out a giggle then sighed. [Well, I shouldn't waste any more of your time, even if my job is boring and this is the first time in 1000 years that I got the chance to interact with a viewer] It responded in a sad tone.

"What exactly is your job?"

[Well I'm glad you asked. Void Chan's job is to ferry off humans like you into another world!]

"You haven't done it in 1000 years?"

[Technically I oversee reincarnation as a whole so the spirits of anyone that dies in this world or the next interacts with my domain.]

"Oh"

[But also you are the first spirit I've ever had in the past 1000 years that is conscious]

I looked at my reflection in the void. "So this isn't a normal thing? Me being able to watch myself in my room in a loop like this"

[No it's not, you are special, matter of fact, only one other soul has ever had the ability to even communicate with Void Chan. Usually souls aren't conscious in this room. ]

"I see"

[Yes, that means you are special, a Viewer.]

"A viewer"

[How can Void Chan explain this? A Viewer is someone who can see inside and interact with the Void.]

"Is that like, a good thing"

[I can't say. I've never been one]

"..." 

[But I can say that they get gifts moments before they go to the other world. With her gift, the last Viewer went on to become the demon king and ended up having to be slain by some instant death ability by the other world's god. Whose still serving time in Limbo because of him breaking the Divine Covenant to do so.]

So Viewers get gifts once they go into another world, and the last viewer apparently had to be killed by a god, whose in god prison now?

[Exactly]

"Can you not read my thoughts?"

[Oh, are you a control freak?]

"What"

[Only control freaks would care about something like that, right]

I guess that me wanting the void to not read my thoughts is because it feels like a lack of control.

[I see]

"Didn't I just say"

[Void Chan doesn't read thoughts, Void Chan… uhm… Void Chan just knows]

"Right"

I immediately thought of something grotesque.

[Ew, okay, Void Chan will stop now you monster]

"Good"

We sat in silence for a bit, before I asked the next question.

"So… how are the gifts decided, and what was the Demon Lord's gift?" I had to admit, even though I didn't really believe the void. I was curious

[The Last Viewer's Gift was an I win button. No matter who she challenged to anything, no matter what conversation she had, or what interaction she had. She was immediately given the ability to mentally press the button, and she just would win]

"That's insane."

[Yeah the god thought so too. He was afraid that if she realized he existed. She would use the button against him and claim his rights over the world. So he blessed a hero with the ability to kill her and erase her from existence to the point that even if her soul regenerated, she would lose her status as Viewer and would have no past memories, and just reincarnate like a regular soul. It was sad for Void Chan to see her like that]

"Wow, I guess I understand why he would kill her though. What an insane power"

[Is it really that strong? Void Chan can think of about a million ways to defeat her]

"Really? Name One"

[If you could mind control her, she wouldn't be able to think to use the button against you] 

"Oh right, I guess so, it wasn't automatic"

[Exactly. Besides for her to even use the power she had to be interacted with. If you choose to ignore her, she can't use it against you, nor could she use it against anyone in a way that wasn't possible. She could only materialize a future where she won, if it was possible for her. All the god had to do was just ignore her really]

"Guess he wasn't so imaginative"

[Guess not, but to answer your other question. Void Chan decides the ability the viewer gets]

"You decided to give her that power??"

[She was Void Chan's first viewer! Void Chan couldn't think of anything else, and didn't realize she would use the gift. She was a loser in her past life, but I guess she learned how to debate, and was physically strong in this other world. So manifesting the future where she won an argument or fight wasn't hard for her.]

"Physically strong enough to beat a god?"

[I guess so]

"That's wow."

[Yeah it was something. Void Chan felt a bit bad though, so it's decided to never give another Hax Ability like that again]

"I see… so, what will my gift be"

I didn't really care. But I did want to know.

[If Void Chan tells you then your soul will head over to the other world. Void Chan is enjoying this convo, and once you leave, Void Chan will probably have to wait a million years to have another one with a Viewer, a thousand at least, and you won't remember what we talked about. You'll just know you are in another world]

"But uhm Void Chan is it? I'll have to head out eventually."

The Void sighed, and begrudgingly answered.

[Okay. Void Chan has decided to give you the gift of… uhm.. Perfect Control Order]

"Perfect Control Order?"

"It means that you have the ability of Ultimate Control Order. How your human self would've interpreted that gift is how the gift will turn out, and once you end up in another world. You will know how your ]

I see. So the void probably didn't give the demon lord the ability to instantly win, but a gift that the demon lord's past self interpreted that way.

"Why did you give me this gift? I can't imagine how you would come up with that.

[If Void Chan had to explain. It's because… you seem like someone who values the order of things immensely. Like a control freak]

"A Control Frea-" Before I could finish my sentence, I blinked and opened my eyes to see nothing but lush greenery before me.

What just happened? One moment I was on my way to visit my younger siblings, the next, I'm, in a fantasy world?

Even though I couldn't hear anything. A part of me felt like a teenage girl far away from me was saying something.

"Don't forget Void Chan? What the hell is a void cha-

My words were interrupted by the sound of a monotone voice.

{GIFT UNLOCKED]

Perfect Ruler Class System

AKA The Dominus

-The ability to subjugate anyone with a level lower than the user. These subjects share their thoughts, senses, and items with the user, who has complete dominion over them as well. Who can choose their exact actions or leave them on autopilot. Any experience points the subjects gain will be shared with. the user. The Ruler is also able to see their subjects' health from a distance, as well as the amount of mana they have, and the amount of experience they need to level up. The viewer is also immune to any form of mind manipulation, such as mind control, forced telepathy, and illusions. 

ABILITY UNLOCKED:

Eye of the King:

Anyone you look with intention of control is subject to The Dominus, regardless of level or strengtg. This is only usable once a month.

ABILITY UNLOCKED

Divine Speech.

The wielder of this ability is a viewer whose eyes have pierced into the void, and as such their words have a sense of divinity in them as the void did.

ABILITY UNLOCKED

True View

As a viewer, the wield of this ability can tell what the level and immediate thoughts of someone in front of them are. These thoughts appear as floating words.

This can be turned off by the Viewer.

A sheet that looked blue and virtual appeared before me. Like the menu in a vr game:

STATUS

NAME: 

Solar Vale

Level 1 = Rank F1

As a viewer, you do not have traditional numerical stats. Your stats are shown in ranks of F to EX. F being equivalent to Level 1 to 10, EX being equivalent to Level 71 and higher.

Every ten levels worth of experience you gain, you raise in Rank. Which increases the stats that started at that rank with you

EXX is a rank that is not obtainable by leveling

Strength:F

Speed:F

Stamina:F

Durability:F

Mana:EXX

Magic Resistance: EXX

I began to talk aloud, but my voice sounded different.

[What is going o-]

Before I finished my sentence, someone from behind me called out to me, in the town of a refined, adult woman.

"Who are you and what are you doing on holy ground?" The voice spoke.

Turning around, a flaming blade nearly kissed my throat.

QUEST TRIGGERED

TAME ANGEL