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Chapter 11 - A rant

Not gonna lie, guys, I don't know where the story is going. Yes, I've already dropped hints throughout the chapters about where it could lead, but I feel like I'm creating a bland protagonist.

​To be honest, it isn't fun writing about Kouta anymore. At first it was, but as I continue, he feels lifeless. Sure, he showed kindness and strong morals at the start, but as he's grown smarter and stronger, he's lost his spark.

He's becoming a 'Gary Stu,' which I really don't like. His personality isn't shining through the way I wanted it to.

​It feels like he can do anything and never truly fails. Even if he does hit a snag, it's just a minor setback before he pushes back.

What do you guys think?

I'm asking because I want to hear your thoughts while I work on Chapter 11

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