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Naruto: the Ordeal of a Ninja

Meat_Muncher
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Placed into the dark and militaristic setting of ninjas and chakra, Shinzō Taiyō awakens to the world or naruto at its worst. His body covered in soot and ash, burned slightly from its residual heat, lying in the remnants of his once peaceful home. Exhausted, Bloody, and now without a village to call home, Taiyō eyes burn with a power not of this world. (I do not own either Naruto, Written by Kishimoto or the Webtoon Ordeal, Written by Brent Bristol)
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Chapter 1 - Warnings and Clarification

Hello to those who are going to be reading this Fanfic, My name is Meat_Muncher...I know sus name but I made it as a joke and for the funny years ago. I then never changed it so it'll stay for now until maybe I'll need to change it for professionalism...or something...idk.

Anyway I'm making this chapter to immediately get some stuff out of the way and for certain problems that may occur later to be rectified aka this is the important questions answered chapter.

Firstly. Thank you to all those who see this and might stick with it all the way to its end because hopefully I can end this story how I want to with zero regrets.

I'm hoping that by being honest with you guys and ladies that you'll know what your jumping into and how this story will go despite being pretty new to this.

Okay let's start by knocking out some of these questions I have to get through, the biggest ones are these guys.

1. No Harem

This one will stay no matter what and I mean it, seriously I hate the idea in general, and I do mean it as in no relationships besides to one person.

Because I seen to many fic's where the Author says "Oh there's totally no Harems" and then the MC gets let's 2 to 3 women in a relationship -_- .

2. No to very little Bashing

This is another big problem that I see mainly in Naruto fic's, yes readers, no longer will you be subjected to the cringe that is Character Bashing in this Fic. If you, the reader, wish to bash and hate on a character feel free to fire a comment about them, but I won't do it.

3.Lore accurate

Imma be as accurate to the world of Naruto and Ordeal power system as I can. I know most of you readers know how bad the world of Naruto is.

These guys send children out to die or get gud essentially and 90 percent of them will do so without even realizing it. So I'll do my absolute best to describe it in a way that's brutal but never over the top unless it truly is that bad.

4.Almost No Modern Slang

This is a stupid rule I know but please bear with me. I find there's nothing that will kill my immersion and love of a story harder than getting to a cringe part were the MC continues throughout a story to say some modern Slang or term and then makes a joke out if it like he not crazy.

you'll never get that from me unless it was said or implied in the world of Naruto I promise.

5. No Other Characters

Weird rule but ill explain and it'll be quick and simple. What I mean is that the only Character you will see with Kimyo powers is the MC. no other characters from Ordeal will appear in this story.

I want to write this story with Naruto ,The world not the character, being the main focus in mind.

Those are the big rules, I have some tiny ones but these guys are the big ones and i felt needed to be addressed.

With that being through at least for now let's get to the other stuff, This is a story about our MC having the powers of Kimyo from the Webtoon Ordeal. I've been searching sporadically for a Ordeal fanfic for almost a year now and haven't found a single one I wanted to read so instead I decided to finally toss my hat in the ring to make my own.

The MC will not start off OP in the beginning, that does not mean he won't be strong but he will not start out with God like Kimyo powers like Che Heart's or Vaal Vajezatha's but he will get there eventually.

He also will still be using Naruto chakra and Jutsu because this is a Naruto fic.

I did look at the Naruto map, so I'll try to be as accurate to the Elemental nations as I can. On top of that I'll be as accurate to ninja as I can as well ,to some I know that's a breath of fresh air.

I didn't study japanese name meanings and how Kishimoto did it, Study Naruto clans and where they were in the different hidden villages and how they would be portrayed, and download a entire of list of jutsu to not use it. Again I want to do this as right as I can and make pretty educated guesses on already there knowledge.

Sorry about the brick of rules and slight weeb bragging but it's just so anyone who reads this gets a understanding of what I want to create.

I don't want to make just another *Naruto fic* where the clan knowledge is wrong, jutsu and there names are incorrect, Mc is Bashing on and on about Sasuke and Sakura and the hidden leaf village, characters are written weird and don't act how they should, Basic revenge plot, joins Akatsuki, is stupid op in the beginning, and then drops the fic. I know plenty of those story and I will not be one of them.

I want to create a actual good story based on the world of Naruto because for a much as I love Kishimoto, dude had so much world and story to work with and used like 30 percent.

So I promise to yall I'll try my best, also again sorry about the rant.

Understand I am human so I'm bound to make plenty of mistakes. If you see anything that looks wrong, is misspelled, or you have genuine criticisms, please let me know. I'll be happy to rectify or explain why I did it but for those who want to be captains of the dickhead squad and whine and complain about dumb shit, please promptly leave my fic.

My fic is for everyone but everyone might not like it, if you end up being one of those who end up disliking my fic, just know I'm glad you gave me a chance enough for you to even gain a opinion on it.

To those who read all the way until this point, I thank you immensely. You guys are who I gotta please and I'll do my honest best, and hopefully provide you with a solid story that actually reflects how Naruto's world should be instead of forcing the world around a Sub-par Mc.

Enjoy

Sincerely by: Meat_Muncher