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Red Eyes part 1 : The Awakening of the Black Devil

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In a heroic fantasy world, we are following the story of Alexander Star, who is being guided by Demon-B — a being that wants to seek revenge for the death of Alexander’s parents, who were killed by a hero. Leaving his home and his loved ones behind, Alexander sets out to begin his own legend: the Legend of the Black Devil.
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Chapter 1 - Prologue : The Thousandth battle

Heaven & Hell 

As God created His palace, Heaven, there was Hell, a restricted palace for His unfaithful creations. Then, God started to create His companions.

All of them had their own unique personalities and names: Azrael, the one who shows the way for souls; Gabriel, the messenger of God and God's mouthpiece; and others.

But among them, this story will speak about two : the Devil, one of God's creations, and the other, His proudest daughter, Eleanor.

It all began when Eleanor was born. The Devil was really jealous of the fact that God gave her a body and a face.

As the angels were only spiritual beings—or, if you can imagine, bodies of energy with a cape on them and wings extending out—the only one who seemed to have a part of a mortal body was Gabriel. But a full body created by God is not considered a mortal body but a divine one.

This little thing would create the biggest war of all time and dimensions. As Eleanor was questioning her appearance and talking to her brothers in the quest for wisdom, her unfortunate brothers would search in Hell if they could seek help, as Hell and Heaven were the only two dimensions they could go to by the rules of God.

The Devil saw the unfaithful creations that God had made, which in his eyes declared they should not live. He saw them as mercifully "spared their fate," knowing that was not the case.

In their desperate temptation to be useful in the eyes of God—as for them, they thought these angels were the image of God but were not—they said that they were the first bodies created by God. But unfortunately, not fitting His ideas for His palace, He had made them with flesh and blood, as they were also not considered mortal bodies but divine ones.

Eleanor sought a response to the reason why she had a divine body. She asked God and her brothers why—why she had a treatment different from the others, why she was born like that. She asked many questions, like a child taking his first steps into the real world, but God would tell her its real importance.

Eleanor: «So… can you answer all my questions?»

God: «Eleanor, I can, but please don't be so curious about it, okay?»

Eleanor: «Fine. So why did you created me that way?»

God: «I created you not only for the unique purpose of having a mortal body that looks like a divine body—the purpose is greater… You see, I have been creating a lot of things besides you: the Universe, mortals, and more. But I needed to have a mortal that could be stronger than my divine creations or even stronger than me. And you are not the mortal but my attempt, and later you will be his trusted wife. But this conversation is for another day, so now you know why you are like that.»

Eleanor: «Interesting and also amazing, but I have one last question.»

God: «Tell me.»

Eleanor: «Are there more like me?»

God: «Sorry, my child, but I cannot respond to your question. You remember what I said.»

Eleanor: «Yes, I remember…»

As Eleanor was grateful for God's response, she had this weird sensation that something was missing. In this strange feeling, she asked her brother Gabriel.

Eleanor: «Hello, my dear brother.»

Gabriel: «Hello, Eleanor. What are you hoping for?»

Eleanor: «Well, I have a question.»

Gabriel: «Another?»

Eleanor: «Yes.»

Gabriel: «Okay, fine. What is it?»

Eleanor: «Are there more like me?»

Gabriel: «You know there are some questions I can't answer, but I will make an exception. So don't tell God or anyone, okay?»

Eleanor: «I will, brother, I will.»

Gabriel: «There are more than you—way more—but they aren't with us. They are failures; they cannot stay with us, not here…»

Eleanor: «But where?»

Gabriel: «Be quiet. They are in Hell. You know what Hell is, right?»

Eleanor: «Yes… I know Hell.»

Gabriel: «So, now be quiet and don't tell anybody this, and wait for the instructions of God, okay?»

Eleanor: «Okay…»

Eleanor was surprised by this, thinking that God's makings had always been right, but if Hell exists, it is for a good reason.

Siny's note:

Divine parts are things that were created by God, giving them godly physical strength, endurance, and speed, also making them practically demi-gods—incomparable with most mortals.

Souls are what God makes his creations with to be unique, but they also give them life as they enter the body. And when they die, their souls are transported between dimensions, where the son of God, Azrael, identifies and tells them where they should and can go: in Hell, as God's error, or Heaven, his proudest creation.

Angels are made with a spiritual body and have souls that cannot die, making them immortal with the type of body they have, and they can also change it if they want to.

Mortals are beings designed to live how they intend to in the greatest project of God, which is the Universe. They also can't go further, as they can't, for example, go to another dimension like Hell or Heaven (and others) ;).

Also, the creations of God cannot be undone or annihilated except by themselves or by other creations.

Rage. Anger and hate were the only feelings they had for the injustice of what God had lied to them about. God's name had been banished from this realm and called out as being the worst creator of this realm. On another part, the Devil—the only being telling the truth—was considered a savior, as the angels called him by a similar name: demon. They started to build an army for revenge and to show God their real sons. In another realm, God saw what the Devil saw and knew his plan too. The second he knew, he called all of his sons and daughters.

He said to them that they would create divine armor for them to fight, as some of them didn't even know how to draw a sword. But he also said that they would have an opportunity to train for as much time as they wanted, and at this particular time, he said to Eleanor to come with him.

Eleanor: «What, Father? You don't want me to defend our home?»

God: «Yes, I want you to, but like I told you, 'you are special,' remember?»

Eleanor: «Yes…»

God: «For most of your brothers, they will have armor as their body, but you already have a body; you have armor also, but without a helmet, and a special sword—a sword that defines creation, a sword that can split the universe in half. This sword has two blades and can transform into every weapon that exists, and if you know her well, maybe more…»

Eleanor: «Thanks, but I don't understand why me, why they have to attack us. Father, I have to know about this, please!»

God: «I made a mistake!»

Eleanor looked at God threateningly.

God: «I made a lot of mistakes, and… for every mistake, I put them in Hell, and now I am in danger for what I have created.»

Eleanor: «Calm down, Father. We need, like them, to create a plan for our defense. As for now, the only option we have is to push them out of what they call their new home.»

God: «Yes, you're right, daughter…» 

The Thousand battle is coming to the doors of Heaven. 

God started to create the amour and weapon all divine for all of his loyal sons and daughter and send them to learn how to fight.

Devils his grouping the lost's brothers and started to teach them how to fight and learn every things knows by his anger.

God tell to his angels to not tolerate them and make no mercy for them.

Devil tell to his brother to make them suffer every inch they have left, to make them understand their misery.

God his creating rules to hell for the angels who have betray him that say's that every time they died reincarnate in Hell and not in Heaven. 

Devil started to invent demonic magic and blood magic as also started to learn how to makes portals. 

Between them just the void and nothing else 

The emptiness of the universe where the battle will begin. 

As every one started to get ready for the battle of the creation, Eleanor wanted to speak to her brother, Azreal.

Eleanor: « Hello, dear brother.»

Azreal:« hello, Eleanor what you have in mind ?»

Eleanor: « Well, every one knows that I m a curios person, and I wanted to ask you about this war.»

Azreal:« Well, as I know from the mortals they never really wanted for good or bad reason but they no choice only to submit to the orders and nothings else, hoped everything could be different but this is life as we attended. 

Eleanor:« Yes, I guess every one I m sure on both side don't wanted but like said that's life.»

Life is war, life is bad or good moment or life is just us making our story. 

No.

Life is everything.

Siny's note:

God in this story is not omnipotent, as he cant do something always in the ways he wants to.

Example of his creation. And also he can makes error like the humans in real life, thats reason why he cannot make his creation perfect.

Spirit is a thing that God gave to every creation and the only thing that can be different that soul for being competently mold the way he want to, as for example the angels obey to him. Also he can put a stronger spirit to obey the rules he want to but can never touch what the creation like or dislike and this will be their design by the soul they have. 

Angels have the particular things to not be emotional but some time happen that their soul speak stronger then their spirit, as for Demons they in their case embrace fully their souls being totally opposite to the Angels. 

Eleanor have a special interaction with God and the angels of being the only one to call them calling by brother and father. As for God sharing the same for Eleanor. 

Awakening of Eleanor

The two armies were battling each other when one knight emerged: Eleanor. Eleanor was able to fight with such ease that the demons' army started to flee. She was concentrated—her soul, her heart, her spirit—all merged into one desire: "Defend My Home."

Every step and every slash was calculated without any thought or deliberation.

She moved as if detached from reality, lost in a vision beyond sight where instinct ruled and time slowed.

Between the darkness and her, the only thing she saw was her enemies.

The Devil, seeing this, understood why she was so special and loved; he loathed God even more.

The battle was finished; all the demons and the Devil were fleeing to the original portal.

The Devil knew now that he could not destroy Heaven, but he could destroy something else—something bigger, something created by God. This "thing" was the Universe.

In the Devil's mind, the only thing that God could not see was a purely created demon, as it was created by a new magic as well.

God knew that the Devil would not be defeated easily, so he put a rule for the universe that "if a demon being wants to enter or conquer one of God's favorite planets in the universe, the planet has to have no mortals that can fight against it."

God also put many blessings on some planets.

Siny: "And now it's time for our story to begin. The planet we are going to talk about is Earth for now; the others… are not that interesting. So, the so-called 'Blessing' on Earth makes every being of higher intelligence have special powers. What types of powers? I don't know—it's not my job to describe everyone for now, I hope? Anyway, God, with his almighty kindness, gave a mask that mimics an angel's physical strength, speed, and unlimited endurance. Basically, an angel but as a mortal, and that's it for now. Wait, I think something is missing… mmmh? Oh no, I remember—for God's sake… okay. Fine, we have to talk about Star Lion, 'God of Peace'—awful name, by the way. He is also important for our story, so… Narrator!"

Narrator: "Hm, what? What is going on?"

Siny: "You have to talk about Star Lion."

Narrator: "I didn't talk about him yet?"

Siny: "NO!"

Narrator: "Okay, okay, I am going to talk about him. Ahem, ahem."

Siny's Note:

Magic is everywhere in all dimensions and within.

All the creations of God come limited in magic.

No matter what spell is cast, it always needs magic that will cost you depending on the type of spell it is and if the spell is really strong—enough to go beyond just emptying you of magic—it has a strong chance to kill you or leave you on the edge of death

(for example, leaving you unable to walk or something similar, as it also depends on the condition of the body).

Magic falls under different types; for the large part, they don't need anything to cast a spell, but some of them need special things. For example, blood magic needs blood to cast a spell (any type of blood can be used, but dried blood cannot be used).

Demonic magic needs:

Demon's blood

Being possessed by a demon

A demon itself

Universe

Beach, sea, ocean.

In the depths of my ocean, I find myself alone-lost, abandoned, rejected, or perhaps simply left behind, leaving only silence in my wake. Silence, an old friend who never truly leaves me-at least, that's what I think…

The sea is calm: in fact, it always has been. I have never seen the rain, not from where I am. In the depths of this ocean where I rest, I watch the clouds, the sun passing by, reflecting off the waves. This ocean is mine, and since I have been here, I have never seen anyone. But there is one thing I have come to understand: there is a reason, or perhaps a purpose, to all of this. 

I believe that everything that comes into this world has meaning and the right to exist. But even if I am merely imprisoned in this infinite space, I am certain there is a reason for it.

I once dreamed of my arrival in this world. It was special-I have always had wings in those dreams. But in the vastness of those thoughts, I saw myself falling from the clouds, a large red ribbon tied around my waist. And in the very moment I plunged into the depths, I saw the car of my desires speeding by, and then I was climbing an uncountable number of obstacles. I still don't know what it all means, and I wonder why-why I keep dreaming of this…

In a quietness drowned in sorrow, what is my place in this world of water, light, and darkness ? What is this dream ? I struggle to connect the piece… I long for the truth.

I long to be… well.

Finally.