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Red card the system that hates shortcut

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In modern California, high school football isn’t just a game it’s a ladder out of nothing. Ethan Cross was never poor… just never enough. Not rich enough to be respected. Not talented enough to be chosen. Not strong enough to be kept. When his girlfriend leaves him and his future collapses, Ethan’s world narrows to one thing: the field. That’s when the Red Card System appears. A system that doesn’t reward shortcuts. A system that punishes obsession. A system that grants power—only if Ethan is willing to pay the price. Every activation sharpens his skills beyond human limits. Every victory costs him something invisible. Peace. Identity. Control. As fame grows, rivals rise, and temptation surrounds him, Ethan must survive high school football, a dangerous love triangle, and a system that seems determined to break him before the world ever can. Because in this game Winning isn’t everything. And power always keeps score.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Red Card Moment

The night Madison Hale left him, it didn't rain.

That was the first thing Ethan Cross noticed how unfairly calm the world remained while his life quietly collapsed.

No thunder. No dramatic downpour. Just the steady glow of streetlights lining Crestwood Avenue, humming softly like nothing important had just ended.

Madison stood three steps away from him, her arms folded tight across her chest, phone tucked under her elbow as if even standing here was already wasting her time. She looked good—she always did. Hair neat. Makeup subtle but expensive. The kind of look that said future.

Ethan's cleats were still slung over his shoulder. Sweat dried on his neck. He had come straight from training, legs sore, lungs still burning, heart stupidly hopeful.

They had planned to talk.

He just hadn't known this would be the talk.

"I can't do this anymore, Ethan."

Her voice wasn't shaking. That hurt more than if it had been.

He blinked. "Do what?"

Madison exhaled, slow and controlled, like she'd practiced this sentence in her head all day. "This. Us. Waiting. Hoping. Pretending things will change."

His fingers tightened around the strap of his bag. "Change into what?"

She finally looked him in the eye then, and for a second—just one—he thought he saw regret.

But then it was gone.

"You're seventeen," she said. "And you're still fighting for minutes on a high school team."

The words landed softly.

Still, they cut deep.

"I'm improving," Ethan said quickly. "Coach Whitlock said

"Coach Whitlock benches you every other match," Madison replied. Not cruel. Just honest. "Ethan, I've supported you. For two years. I've stood in the stands when no one even knew your name."

He swallowed. "Then why now?"

She hesitated.

That hesitation was everything.

"Because I don't want an average future," she said finally. "And you… you're stuck chasing a dream that might never happen."

There it was.

Not anger. Not betrayal.

Fear.

Fear of being left behind.

Ethan laughed softly, even though something inside his chest cracked. "So that's it?"

Madison nodded. "I got accepted into the summer prep program. USC-affiliated. Networking. Real opportunities." She looked past him, down the quiet street. "I can't keep pretending love is enough."

The silence stretched.

Ethan searched her face for something—anything—that said this was a mistake.

He found nothing.

"So football makes me unworthy now?" he asked.

She flinched. "Don't twist it."

"I'm not," he said. "I just want to understand."

Madison stepped back. "I hope one day you do."

Then she turned.

No dramatic goodbye.

No tears.

Just the soft click of her heels walking away.

Ethan stood there long after she disappeared around the corner, the weight of his bag digging into his shoulder like punishment.

For the first time since he was a kid, football felt… heavy.

Westbridge High School's stadium lights were still on when Ethan arrived.

The gates were open. The field empty.

He dropped his bag near the bench and walked onto the grass, boots sinking slightly into the turf. This place had always been his sanctuary. The only place where his mind quieted. Where the world made sense.

Tonight, it felt smaller.

He kicked the ball hard.

It slammed into the goalpost with a hollow clang and bounced away.

"Damn it."

He sank onto the grass, elbows on his knees, head bowed.

He thought of Madison's words.

Average future.

He thought of Lucas Vance, laughing with reporters after matches, golden boy of Westbridge. Of Coach Whitlock's sigh whenever Ethan made a mistake. Of scouts writing names that were never his.

Maybe she was right.

Maybe love wasn't enough.

His phone buzzed.

A message lit up the screen.

Madison: I hope you understand one day.

Ethan stared at it.

Then he turned the phone face down.

Something inside him snapped—not loudly, not violently—but cleanly. Like a card sliding out of a deck.

"I'll understand," he murmured to the empty field. "When I'm done."

A sudden dizziness washed over him.

The stadium lights flickered.

Ethan frowned and pushed himself to his feet. "What the—"

The world tilted.

Then everything went black.

When his vision returned, the field was still there—but something was wrong.

The air felt… heavier.

The lights hummed louder, buzzing like insects trapped in glass.

And then—

A translucent red screen snapped into existence in front of his eyes.

Ethan stumbled back, heart slamming against his ribs.

"What the hell—?"

[SYSTEM INITIALIZING…]

The letters burned bright crimson.

He waved his hand through it.

Nothing happened.

"This isn't funny," he said aloud, voice shaking.

[HOST DETECTED: ETHAN CROSS]

[EMOTIONAL TRAUMA LEVEL: CRITICAL]

[ELIGIBILITY CONFIRMED]

"Eligibility for what?" Ethan whispered.

The screen shifted.

A single symbol appeared.

🟥

A red card.

Then the words followed.

[WELCOME TO THE RED CARD SYSTEM]

His breath caught.

System?

No. No, this was stress. Lack of sleep. A mental breakdown. That's what this was.

Right?

[SYSTEM PURPOSE:]

TO FORGE A KING FROM FAILURE

The temperature dropped.

Ethan's skin prickled.

"What kind of joke is this?" he demanded.

The system didn't answer immediately.

Instead, another message appeared.

[SYSTEM RULE #1:]

PAIN IS PROGRESS

A pressure squeezed his chest.

Images flashed through his mind—Madison walking away, Lucas laughing, Coach Whitlock turning his back, the bench, the shadows.

Ethan gasped, dropping to one knee.

"Stop," he hissed.

[SYSTEM RULE #2:]

HUMILIATION IS FUEL

The images sharpened.

The ache intensified.

Then—

It vanished.

Ethan collapsed onto the grass, breathing hard, sweat soaking his shirt.

"…You're insane," he muttered.

A soft chime echoed.

[FIRST OBJECTIVE UNLOCKED]

LOSE EVERYTHING YOU THINK YOU DESERVE

His hands curled into fists.

"I've already lost enough."

The screen pulsed.

[DENIAL NOT ACCEPTED]

He laughed weakly. "So what? You're going to make me worse before I get better?"

A pause.

Then—

[YES.]

Silence swallowed the stadium.

Ethan stared at the red card hovering in front of him.

Something deep inside him—anger, pride, desperation—stirred.

"If I say no?" he asked quietly.

The screen flickered.

[SYSTEM WILL REMAIN DORMANT.]

[YOU WILL REMAIN AVERAGE.]

Madison's voice echoed in his head.

Average future.

Ethan closed his eyes.

Then he opened them.

"…Fine," he said hoarsely. "Do it."

The red card shattered into shards of light that slammed into his chest.

Pain exploded through his body—sharp, consuming, merciless.

He screamed.

And somewhere deep inside, something woke up.

The next morning, Westbridge High buzzed with noise.

Lockers slammed. Laughter echoed. Posters for the upcoming league match plastered the walls—Lucas Vance front and center, grinning like a king.

Ethan walked through it all like a ghost.

His body ached. His mind felt razor-sharp.

He could hear things more clearly. See movements faster.

It scared him.

In the locker room, Lucas glanced over and smirked. "Nice practice last night, Cross. Heard you missed another open shot."

The team laughed.

Ethan didn't respond.

A red notification flickered in his vision.

[HUMILIATION DETECTED]

[MENTALITY +1]

His heart skipped.

He looked up slowly.

Lucas' smile faltered—just a little.

Ethan smiled back.

Not wide.

Not friendly.

Just enough.

That afternoon, Coach Whitlock posted the lineup.

Ethan's name wasn't there.

Again.

The familiar sting hit—but this time, it didn't sink in the same way.

A red glow pulsed.

[BENCHING CONFIRMED]

[COMPOSURE SKILL: LOCKED—PENDING ACTIVATION]

Ethan exhaled.

So this was how it worked.

The worse it got…

…the stronger he became.

Across the hallway, Nova Reyes watched him quietly, notebook tucked under her arm, eyes thoughtful.

And somewhere else on campus, Scarlett Monroe smiled at her phone, reading the match predictions.

Neither of them knew it yet.

But the red card had already been issued.

And Ethan Cross had just stepped onto the path where kings were made or destroyed.

Question for Readers:

Was Madison wrong for leaving Ethan… or was she just being realistic in a world that doesn't wait for dreams?