Hello, guys!
I just wanted to know your opinions on Chapter 1 and the prologue. I kinda think they're a bit bad, and I feel like I don't know what I'm doing.
So, could you share your thoughts on Chapter 1 and the prologue and if it's good or bad by commenting on this part, and maybe suggest some ways I can improve my story? Oh! And please do the same in my other story.
Thank you for reading!