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Heavenforge System; I Was Banished From Heaven, So I Built My Own

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Once the youngest Archangel of Heaven, Lucien was betrayed and exiled to the mortal world for a sin he didn’t commit — the “Murder of a God.” Stripped of his wings and power, he’s reborn among mortals with nothing but a shattered halo and a broken divine core. But when he awakens a Forbidden System buried within his fallen halo — one capable of stealing divine authority — Lucien decides on one thing: If Heaven won’t take him back, he’ll build a new one from the ground up. One free from gods, sins, and lies.
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Chapter 1 - First Sin In Heaven

The skies of Heaven were made of light — woven, endless, perfect.

Every beam hummed with purpose. Every soul moved with obedience.

Heaven was a world beyond mortal comprehension, a realm built on order and purity. Its towers of crystal fire stretched endlessly into the firmament, each crowned with sigils that pulsed like the heartbeat of eternity. Rivers of liquid radiance coursed through its gardens, feeding trees that bore fruit of pure aether. Choirs of angels sang hymns that resonated across time, harmonizing with the breath of creation itself.

It was here that the Primordial Beings dwelled — Gods who shaped worlds, Angels who maintained them.

Each existed to serve the Throne Eternal, that blinding presence which no eye, mortal or divine, could bear to behold.

Michael, the Archangel of War, stood as Heaven's sword — unwavering, merciless, forever loyal.

Gabriel, Archangel of Peace, was its balm — soft-spoken, radiant, and wise beyond all ages.

And among them stood Lucien, the Archangel of the Dawn.

Where others embodied might or mercy, Lucien was radiance itself — the light that bridged night to day, the first spark that birthed color into creation. His wings shimmered like the first sunrise after chaos, every feather a mirror of beauty too divine for words. When he passed, even the firmament seemed to pause. When he spoke, choirs faltered to listen.

He was loved. He was revered. He was perfect.

Or so he thought.

It began as a whisper — a thought that should never have been born.

"If I am made in the image of light… why must I kneel before it?"

The thought lodged in his mind like a splinter in gold. It was small, quiet, but impossible to remove.

Lucien had watched countless ages unfold. He had seen mortals rise from dust, love, kill, and dream. He had seen gods destroy and rebuild worlds for sport. And through it all, he and his kin remained unchanging — eternal, obedient, and bound.

They did not question. They did not desire.

Yet the more Lucien looked upon creation, the more he saw beauty — in imperfection, in struggle, in change.

And when he caught his reflection upon the silver lakes of Elariel, he saw that beauty in himself. His light was not the cold flame of Heaven's will — it was warm, vibrant, alive.

He felt pride.

A dangerous thing for an angel.

But pride was the only thing that felt his own.

Heaven's highest hall — the Empyrean Chamber — was carved from living light. The air itself shimmered with the voices of the Thrones, the ruling council of Heaven.

Lucien knelt at their feet, head bowed. His halo glowed faintly, a fragile ring trembling against the suffocating brilliance that filled the hall.

"I have done as commanded," Lucien began, his voice strong yet edged with something dangerous — sincerity. "I have guided the suns, sung the hymns of morning, and guarded the Gates. But tell me… do we not deserve more than obedience? Do angels never ascend?"

The words hung in the air like the first drop of ink upon holy parchment.

Michael's eyes flicked toward him — sharp as judgment.

Gabriel's lips parted, but she said nothing.

From the blazing heart of the hall came no answer, only a silence so deep it felt alive.

The light of the Thrones pulsed once — and in that rhythm was wrath.

To question the order was not merely defiance. It was blasphemy.

And yet, Lucien's heart swelled, not with regret, but revelation.

He had spoken the truth.

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The next dawn never came.

The God of Dawn — Solarius, Lucien's mentor, his father in all but name — was found lifeless.

His celestial light, once endless, was shattered across the firmament like spilled gold. His divine essence bled into the clouds, staining Heaven's glow with sorrow.

The choirs wept. The Thrones stirred.

And from the high seat of judgment came the decree:

"Lucien of the Dawn. You have slain your master and defiled the light. For this crime, you shall die by it."

The words rippled through Heaven, breaking the harmony of the spheres.

Lucien's wings flared in disbelief, feathers trembling like blades drawn for battle. "Lies! I would never— I served him! I loved him!"

But the light above did not bend for tears or truth. For angels are not meant to question — only to serve. And Lucien had already sinned by thinking.

Two figures descended from the luminous clouds — Michael and Gabriel.

Lucien's brothers.

Michael's armor gleamed with the fire of a thousand suns, his gaze as cold as forged iron. Gabriel, serene as always, looked upon Lucien with sorrow that felt heavier than any judgment.

"Please, brother," Gabriel whispered, her voice trembling with the soft melody of rain. "Do not make this harder than it already is."

Lucien's eyes burned. "Do not call me brother when you stand beside my executioners."

He tried to flee, wings snapping open in a desperate blaze — but divine chains erupted from the ground, searing his flesh. Light itself became his prison, binding his arms and dragging him toward the Empyrean Gate — the place where Heaven touched the endless Void.

The choirs had gone silent. The air trembled with grief and fear.

Lucien struggled against the light, his voice echoing across the endless sky.

"Was it sin to dream? To see beauty in what I am?! You fear me not for pride — but because I saw the truth!"

The Thrones did not answer.

Heaven itself seemed ashamed to look upon him.

The moment of execution came like the end of a hymn.

Lucien stood before the Gate — a vast abyss framed by celestial fire. The stars beyond it whispered of oblivion.

Michael raised his blade, its edge singing with divine resonance. "Lucien of the Dawn," he said, his voice like thunder, "may the light cleanse you."

Lucien met his gaze — defiant, radiant still. "Then let it try."

The beam struck him with the force of creation itself. Light turned to fire. His halo cracked, a ring of broken glass burning into his skull. His six wings — those divine emblems of his soul — were torn from his back by his brothers. Feathers turned to ash as they drifted down into eternity.

Lucien screamed — not in pain, but in fury.

His cry echoed through Heaven like a storm tearing through paradise.

And then… he fell.

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There was no time in the void. No sound. No warmth. Only the ache of existence fading away.

Lucien drifted in that endless dark — his form fractured, his light leaking into nothingness. The cold gnawed at what remained of him, and for the first time since the dawn of creation, he felt fear.

He was dying. Truly dying.

He could surrender. Let go. Become one with the cycle, reborn as something lesser, something obedient.

But in the suffocating dark, he remembered the warmth of dawn. The way the sun kissed the horizon. The beauty of imperfection.

He remembered his name.

He remembered his pride.

And he refused.

Lucien's hand — half-shadow, half-light — clenched. A spark ignited in his palm, faint but defiant.

"Not yet," he whispered into the void. "I am not done."

Through sheer will, he tore open the veil between realms. A storm of heavenly fire burst forth, scorching his flesh and soul alike. The rift screamed — light and darkness twisting, colliding — and from its heart erupted a blinding explosion that scarred the fabric of creation.

Even the gods looked away.

Lucien was hurled from the void, crashing into the mortal plane.

The world greeted him not with glory, but with rain.

He landed in a ruined field, the earth blackened by his descent. Thunder cracked above as the heavens raged, unwilling to let go of their fallen child.

Lucien's body trembled. His once-perfect skin was torn and burned, glowing faintly with embers of fading divinity. The soil beneath him hissed where his blood touched it — liquid light dripping from a body that refused to die.

He tried to rise. His limbs shook. Each movement felt like tearing open old wounds.

But he crawled — inch by inch — through mud and ash.

The rain came harder. It stung his skin, extinguishing the last traces of his holy fire.

Still, he moved.

His breath came ragged. His voice, once divine, was hoarse and cracked.

Yet he whispered, "So this… is the world below."

There was no choir. No radiance. Only the sound of his own heart, beating weakly against the storm.

And then — a voice, cold and mechanical, echoed in the depths of his fading mind.

[Heavenforge System: Activated.]

[Welcome, Fallen One.]

[Objective: Forge a new Heaven.]

Lucien froze. His breath hitched. The words weren't from above — they came from within him.

He laughed — a bitter, broken sound.

"So even the Throne cannot silence me…"

Slowly, painfully, he lifted his head to the storm. His eyes, once golden, now burned with an unstable crimson light.

"You took my light," he whispered. "So I shall make my own."

Lightning struck the field, illuminating his bloodied form. The ground trembled. The storm roared in answer.

And within the shattered body of the fallen Archangel, something ancient awakened — the first spark of the Heavenforge, the power to build a paradise not of servitude, but of will.

Lucien fell as an angel.

But in that storm, amidst the blood and the ruin, he rose as something far greater.