Hey Guys. So as promised. Here we are. The revised version of Lord of Fire with some and many changes. Please enjoy the first chapter.
Chapter 1: The Fire Nation Prince
The Fire Nation capital burned against the twilight sky. Towers of volcanic stone and arches of molten metal reached upward, and below them, streets of polished obsidian led toward the crowded docks. Thousands had gathered. Nobles in embroidered uniforms, generals with gleaming medals, representatives of every great house, they stood shoulder to shoulder, murmuring among themselves as they waited.
At the center, on a raised dais, sat a single figure. His throne was carved from obsidian and inlaid with gold. Tall, stern, regal. His eyes burned, his jaw was set, and his blood-red cloak fell around him like a mantle. Every citizen recognized him.
To his left stood a young woman. Her crimson and black dress was immaculate, her raven hair bound in intricate braids. When the crowd murmured, she didn't glance at them, she stared through them, her eyes the color of forged steel.
Across the harbor, a ship emerged from the mist. Its hull was strange, frosted silver with iron-red accents that glinted like embers. The same ship that had carried Prince Zuko away years ago. It cut through the water in silence, dropped anchor with a resonant clank, and its ornate bow swung open.
Twelve firebenders marched out first, forming two precise rows. Flames danced around their fingertips in ceremonial salute.
Then the crowd went quiet.
From the ship's darkness stepped an older man. His face was weathered, his silver hair tied back, his uniform faded. He moved with measured grace, and as he walked down the gangway, whispers rippled through the crowd. "Iroh," someone murmured. "The exiled prince returns."
But the whispers turned to cheers when the true heir appeared.
Prince Zuko strode onto the dock. The burn mark traced a path across his cheek. His stormy eyes burned with something fierce, and his dark hair framed a face set in steel. He wore a battle-worn uniform adorned with royal sigils. He raised his hand in salute, acknowledging the roar of the crowd.
Behind him, a smaller figure was dragged along, shrouded in a heavy, dark hood. The shorter individual seemed unwilling to be seen, hidden behind layers of fabric. Only the hint of determined eyes peeked out.
Zuko marched toward the throne. Halfway there, his gaze flickered sideways to the young woman beside his father. For a heartbeat, something passed between them, a look loaded with years of unspoken rivalry. She returned his gaze with a stare cold enough to freeze flame.
He turned back to the throne.
"Father," he said. His voice cut through the noise. "The noble clans of the Fire Nation and the war council, I have returned. And as promised, I have come with a gift."
The crowd held its breath.
"Ever since Fire Lord Sozin," Zuko continued, "we have searched for the one who could hinder our plans for conquest. I have found that hindrance."
No change in his father's expression. But beside him, the princess couldn't hide the hatred simmering in her eyes.
Zuko's lips curved slightly. He shifted his gaze to the assembly.
"For the first time since Avatar Roku," he declared, "I give to you...the Avatar."
He yanked off the hood.
A boy stood there. Barely twelve. His skin bore the unmistakable tattoos of the Air Nomads. His wide eyes took in the scene with a mixture of fear and wonder.
The crowd erupted. Shouts, applause, whispers of disbelief. Even the ruler on the throne allowed a fleeting smile, a subtle acknowledgment.
The exiled prince had returned. And he had brought the world with him.
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[Almost two weeks ago.]
In another world. In another time.
The subway car rattled along the tracks. Fluorescent lights flickered overhead. A young man sat slumped in the corner, head against the window, watching city lights blur past.
Fired.
The word sat in his stomach like cold lead. He'd given them late nights, missed meals, sleepless weeks and for what? So some suit could tell him corporate restructuring meant he was no longer necessary?
His jaw clenched. The train screeched to a halt. He forced himself up, stepped onto the dim platform.
The underground was nearly empty. A few stragglers, half-drunk, homeless, miserable. None looked at him. Why would they?
He climbed the stairs and emerged into the open city.
The sky was black. Streetlights hummed. The air smelled like wet concrete and exhaust. He stood at the curb, waiting for the light to change.
Then the rain came.
Not a drizzle. A full-blown downpour.
"You're kidding me," he growled, pulling his soaked blazer tighter.
He looked around. The streets were empty. No walkers. No cabs. No cars.
Just him.
And a truck.
Headlights burned through the rain like twin suns, growing larger. At first he thought nothing, just a delivery vehicle. But something was wrong.
It wasn't slowing down.
"Shit!"
He threw himself out of the way, hit the pavement hard. His elbows scraped against concrete. Pain shot through his arms. He looked up and saw the truck skid into a hard 180-degree turn.
It stopped. Engine rumbling. Headlights locked on him.
"You crazy motherfucker!" he shouted, pushing himself up. His suit, his only suit, was ruined. Soaked. Streaked with mud.
He glared at the truck. It hadn't moved. Just sat there watching him.
Something snapped.
"Alright," he muttered, rolling up his sleeves. "You wanna play?"
He started toward it, fists clenched.
Then the truck moved.
Fast.
Too fast.
He barely reacted before it lunged at him, tires screeching, water spraying like tidal waves.
"Oh, fuck!"
He leaped sideways, slammed into a brick wall. Pain exploded across his back. His knees scraped the sidewalk, blood mixing with rain.
The truck screeched to another halt.
And then another truck appeared. Parked at the entrance to the subway.
He froze.
Turned slowly.
The first truck still sat there, engine growling.
The second truck revved.
Both surged forward at once.
His legs locked. He tried to run, but his body wouldn't obey. His knees gave out. He dropped to the ground. The pain faded, drowned out by pure terror.
This was it.
"No, no, no….!"
Headlights. Rain. Impact.
A crushing force slammed into him from both sides. Bones snapped. Pain erupted everywhere. His scream never left his throat.
Then nothing.
***
He woke in a cramped metal chamber. Dim light flickered overhead. Disoriented, he sat up on a narrow iron bed, mind struggling to piece together fragments, trucks barreling through rain, a desperate leap, curses echoing in his ears. Yet somehow, there was no sign of injury. His throat felt like he'd swallowed tar, and his body radiated warmth.
He swung his legs over the edge. A creeping unfamiliarity settled in. His skin was lighter. His frame leaner. A few inches shorter. A puzzled hand moved to his groin and confirmed the unthinkable.
This body wasn't his.
He scanned the room. Spartan. Metal. A small cabin on a ship. His eyes landed on a nightstand cluttered with objects. He lunged for the drawer, rifled through garments, red, black, bold colors that resonated with authority. His heart thumped as he found a small hand mirror at the bottom.
He stared into it.
And nearly gasped.
Looking back wasn't the tired, weathered face of a down-on-his-luck man from New York. Instead, he saw a teenager. A face marred by a burn scar running along his left eye.
Then pain hit.
Like an avalanche of raw electricity. He clutched his head as a guttural scream tore from his throat. He collapsed onto the cold metal floor, writhing as images flooded in, hundreds of flashes of a single, fiery prince. Memories not his own. The agony stretched into eternity, until finally, it ebbed into fragile silence.
Gasping, he dragged himself back to the bed. Retrieved the mirror with shaking fingers.
He traced every detail of his new face. It all crashed down on him.
He was no longer the man beaten down by life in New York. He was Prince Zuko. Exiled heir of the Fire Nation.
He inspected himself more thoroughly. Lighter skin. Leaner build. Angular features. A distant memory stirred, childhood afternoons watching animated tales of honor and battles. A bittersweet smile tugged at his lips.
Then a new memory surfaced.
A girl. Her presence so potent, her visage so vivid, it froze him. A debilitating fear gripped him, not just terror, but paralyzing dread. He remembered the Agni Kai. The duel where the young prince had faced his father. The scar. And her. His sister. The memory stoked inner turmoil, an unyielding reminder of the costs of his destiny.
His emotions settled into contemplative calm. He had died, at least, he believed so and woken in the body of Prince Zuko. How and why was beyond comprehension. But the evidence was irrefutable.
A new life lay before him. Fraught with peril and possibility.
He thought of his old life. Mob deals. Disappointments. Failure. Those memories… of fucking trucks chasing him through rain-soaked streets, seemed now both terrifying and liberating.
And yet, staring at his reflection, he recognized the potential of a fresh start. Maybe this was his chance. A break from the life that had left him broken. Perhaps it was a dream, or some twisted stroke of fate. But in that moment, it felt real. And against every survival instinct, it seemed like a goddamn good thing.
He sat on the edge of the cot, the echo of his screams still whispering in his ears. His mind was a battlefield, regret for what was lost, fear for what lay ahead, and tentative hope that this new identity could lead him to a future far removed from the one he'd known.
Just then, a deep voice echoed from beyond the metal door.
"Prince Zuko."
Firm. Laden with authority.
He wiped the lingering traces of pain from his eyes. Rose to his feet. And steeled himself for what lay beyond that cold, metal door.