In a small room, a boy who appeared to be around six years old slowly opened his eyes.
"Where… am I?"
"Where is this place?" After scanning his surroundings, he noticed that everything around him seem to be different from his bedroom.
"Ahh… my head is in complete mess! No, it feels like my brain is about to explode!"
Then, as if struck by a sudden realization, his expression changed drastically.
"I transmigrated…?"
"Konoha?... Hokage?... Shinobi Wars?" the boy eyes widened in shock.
"Is this some kind of prank? But what are these strange things in my head?"
"F*ck! Why am I smaller? Did I really transmigrate? And into the world of Naruto?"
He then examined his hand and feet and exclaimed in shock.
"This is ridiculous! Everyone knows that transmigraters either die unexpectedly or have some sort of accident but I didn't do anything!"
"I was just getting ready to travel to Venus in the rocket which our great country "Kina" made."
"We're just about to show the world why Kina is numba one but I unexpectedly transmigrated when I taking a quick nap"
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There was no doubt about it. He has indeed transmigrated from earth to the world of Naruto.
And to be honest he didn't feel good about sudden transmigration.
He was just about to make his name famous all over the world and honor his country.
When his lifelong dream of being the first human to set foot in Venus and make his name Ching Chong famous he suddenly died and don't even know the reason.
If he didn't go on time they will surely decrease his Social Credit.
A sudden sharp pain shot through his head, and an overwhelming flood of memories invaded his mind.
The body he now inhabited belonged to a boy named Itsuki Seiryu.
And, to be honest, what a damn good name but not good as his name Ching Chong!
He had money, a house, no parents, and was a complete nobody. He was a background character who didn't even have a single scene in the original work!
Maybe he died in the Shinobi War by becoming another cannon fodder.
What determined one's fate in this world?
Wealth? No.
Blood and bloodlines were everything. The legacies of powerful clans reigned supreme. Yes there are some characters like Jiraiya, Minato and Orochimaru who were civilians but they failed in comparison with people born from powerful legacies and clan.
Yet, his surname was Itsuki. Not Uzumaki, not Senju, not Uchiha!
In other words, he was an ordinary civilian with absolutely no inherited bloodline. There was no beast with infinite chakra sealed inside him, and he was not the incarnation of some white aliens.
His parents had merely been ordinary ninjas of Konoha, who had tragically lost their lives during a mission. What they left behind was a little inheritance. It was just enough for him to survive.
If he wants to survive in this world he has to become stronger so he doesn't die in the battlefield.
According to the memories of this body First Shinobi War is still ongoing. And if I remember correctly Minato and Kushina were born during this time so I should be their peer. The war will stop approximately 9 years later.
The five Great Shinobi Villages have been fighting back and forth. Of course, this is only part of it. War has never been so superficial. As long as people have greed, hatred, there will always be wars.
Looking outside of the window Itsuki saw it was night time so he decided to sleep.
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Waking up early in the morning Itsuki checked whether he was dreaming or really transmigrated in Naruto world.
"Hmm… Everything seem to be same so I really got transmigrated"
"Now what should I do! Should I become a Ninja or ordinary civilian?"
"Wait… I forgot the most important thing I should have done the moment I opened my eyes yesterday!"
Immediately he pulled down his pants and took a look. "Okay, at least my little brother is still as mighty as ever!"
"No wonder I felt so heavy! Turns out, my brother is the one with real talent!"
Despite this small consolation he tried to gave him my distracting himself, he still felt and overwhelming sense of despair. He had always loved Naruto, and like many others, he had once dreamed of traveling into its world.
In his dreams, he would have Hinata in his right arm and Tsunade in his left arm because big bazooka's are always the priority.
Maybe even seducing Otsutsuki Kaguya, the rabit goddess, the real MILF of Naruto World.
But now, it seemed like he wasn't even worthy of such fantasies.
An ordinary surname, no bloodline, no colourful eyes.
In a world where a person dies every second, survival alone seemed impossible.
There were exceptional ninja's especially Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara. The monstrous duo who could single-handedly crush the Four Great Nations, set forest ablaze, and shake the entire world with their sheer power.
If he could have such abilities, wouldn't that make him completely unstoppable?
He could f*uck whoever he wanted.
Ahem…. No, he meant he could do whoever he wanted.
No….. That still didn't sound right. Anyway, the point was that he would be invincible.
Just then, a voice echoed in this mind,
[Ding, the Oops, I'm Too Strong System is binding.]
[The system has been successfully bound. This system is too strong so if Host completes his mission in given time you will become too strong. Given the host is so weak to even be a cannon fodder this system will release a newbie benefit to help you through this difficult time. Host prepare to be OP beyond reason so don't die, okay? Wahahahaha. Ahem… system lost its composure for a second, the system present two options to the Host:
Become a ninja
2. Live life as an ordinary civilian
According the path host chooses system will give newbie benefit which will help the host]
A system? What the hell is the name?
Still, he got some hope in his eyes.
'So according to the system whichever path I choose it will give me newbie benefit and future reward! So which path should I choose?' Itsuki pondered
'If I choose to become a ninja I can get rewards which will surely help me to get a foothold in this dangerous world but if I choose to remain ordinary civilian I will be far away from the danger and live a simple life' Itsuki kept thinking for a long time
"F*ck it I choose to be a ninja"
[Ding, Host choose to be ninja, the newbie gift is opening…..]
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{From now on will continue the chapter which I made GPT rewrite to see how much different it is. So please compare both of it and leave a comment for which is part is good, Mine or GPT.}
A boy who looked about six years old slowly opened his eyes.
"Where… am I?"
"Wait… where is this place?" He blinked, scanning the room. Nothing looked like his bedroom.
"Ahh… my head! It feels like my brain is about to explode!"
Then it hit him like a lightning bolt. His expression froze in horror.
"I transmigrated…?"
"Konoha? Hokage? Shinobi Wars?!" His eyes widened to the size of dinner plates. "Is this some kind of prank?! And what the hell is going on in my head?"
He stared at his tiny hands and feet. "F*ck! I'm smaller?! Really? I transmigrated into… the Naruto world?!"
"This is ridiculous! Usually, people die in their first week after transmigrating—or get hit by a bus or something. And me? I was just about to become the first human on Venus, proudly representing my glorious country, Kina!"
A sharp pain shot through his head, and an overwhelming flood of memories hit him like a tsunami. The body he now inhabited belonged to a boy named Itsuki Seiryu.
"Not a bad name, I guess… but seriously, nothing beats Ching Chong." He grimaced.
Itsuki's new life came with a house, a little money, and… absolutely nothing else. His parents were gone, leaving him a mundane inheritance, just enough to survive. No Byakugan, no Sharingan, no tailed beast. Just a normal kid in a world where bloodlines decide everything.
Yeah. He was cannon fodder material. Ordinary, weak, and probably destined to die in some pointless shinobi skirmish.
The First Shinobi War was still ongoing. According to his memories, Minato and Kushina were children too—his peers. The war would rage on for nine more years.
Looking outside, Itsuki saw it was night. "Guess I'll sleep… if this tiny body even lets me."
Morning came, and Itsuki checked if this was a dream. Everything seemed… real.
"Now what should I do? Ninja? Civilian? Or maybe… coffee shop barista?"
Wait. Something far more important. He yanked down his pants. "Okay… at least my little brother is still as mighty as ever!"
A small consolation, but despair still lingered. He had dreamed of this world—him holding Hinata in one arm, Tsunade in the other… maybe even seducing Kaguya. But now? With zero bloodline and zero special powers, he was nowhere near worthy.
Then, a voice echoed in his mind.
[Ding! Oops, I'm Too Strong System is binding.]
[Host detected: pathetic cannon fodder. Activating newbie benefits. Wahahaha… ahem.]
[Choose your path: 1. Become a ninja 2. Live as a civilian. Each path grants new benefits.]
A system? Really? Itsuki couldn't believe it. Yet… hope sparkled in his tiny eyes.
"If I follow this system, I get rewards and benefits? Nice. Survival just got interesting."
He pondered for a long time. "If I stay a civilian, I might live safely… but boring. If I become a ninja… I could survive, get stronger… and maybe even become unstoppable."
"F*ck it. I choose ninja!"
[Ding! Host chose Ninja path. Newbie gift is opening…]
A small grin spread across his face. "Let's see how OP I can get."
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Hello there! I'm a newbie writer and I can proudly say I don't have a single experience for writing except the essays in school haha. This chapter will be my experiment, I will post this chapter and wait for 2 days to see how much response I will get and if my writing quality is good for readers or not. If I get good response and my writing quality is good for readers I will upload 10 chapters 2 days later because I have already finished 23 chapters.
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